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Post by Zam on Apr 14, 2012 0:11:48 GMT -5
Meanwhile, back in Llanview... Honestly, I'm kidding. I know better than to do that at this point in the story ... tempting as it is. ;D Christian slumped forward into Olli's arms just before he could reveal the identity of the person Luise suspected put Olli in grave danger... * not breakfast reading** remember our good friend, story warnings?Enjoy! CHAPTER NINETY-ONE - AN UNEXPECTED VISITORwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=103What awesome speculation from my amazingly devoted readers! If you haven't read their reviews to chapter 90, I recommend you do so. There's some really good spec there. Afterwards, read the chapter and see if you (and they) were right! Stay tuned for what happens next! Thank you all!
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Post by Zam on Apr 13, 2012 22:57:31 GMT -5
I woke up early this morning and went straight to the computer. Christian!!?? Damn Zam!! Really?? And I have to wait two weeks. Now that is definitely a cliffhanger and it is absolutely great. Who is the financier? I have no idea but I will stick with Justus just because. A absolutely wonderful story! But isn't it amazing how quickly two weeks have flown by? Justus has been very busy dyeing all of the Lahnstein's Easter eggs and ... admittedly, there are fewer Lahnsteins at this point in the story, but still! If Frau Lentil hard boils the eggs, Justus must color them. She's very exacting in the kitchen.
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Post by Zam on Apr 13, 2012 22:55:07 GMT -5
Zam, I only hope that Chris will not die! and about who is the Financier, I bet that Louise is very scared, Olli is astonished and Chris is destroyed by the person... if I say Greg! Very very soon you will find out ... who Luise has to be frightened of. As for Christian's fate ... stay tuned!
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Post by Zam on Mar 31, 2012 14:19:51 GMT -5
I woke up early this morning and went straight to the computer. Christian!!?? Damn Zam!! Really?? And I have to wait two weeks. Now that is definitely a cliffhanger and it is absolutely great. Who is the financier? I have no idea but I will stick with Justus just because. A absolutely wonderful story! Wouldn't it be funny if after all this time it was the butler? No. Not funny. Tragic for what's happened. And what's coming.
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Post by Zam on Mar 31, 2012 1:42:23 GMT -5
There's a man with a gun and he's out for blood. Enjoy! CHAPTER NINETY - VENGEANCEwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=102I won't be posting a new chapter next week. Things here are kinda hectic. Thanks as always for sticking with the story and it's twists and turns! I really appreciate your kind words too! Danke!
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Post by Zam on Mar 23, 2012 23:07:29 GMT -5
Oh, Olli. The gunfight has ended. The red-shirts have been killed. Now it's time for lovers to rejoice. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-NINE - CRISIS AVERTEDwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=101Thanks for the super comments this week. I hope all my readers are relived to have gotten to the climax of the story. I hope you like the rest, too!
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Post by Zam on Mar 23, 2012 22:57:36 GMT -5
Zam.......woohoo....they're not dead....at the moment!! Sio, I love you. You're ever the optimist!
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Post by Zam on Mar 16, 2012 23:55:59 GMT -5
My outline for this chapter says, "A gunfight. People get shot." It's rather to the point. ;D Please take cover or strap on your kevlar vests. I take no responsibility for readers caught in the crossfire. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-EIGHT - THE CAVALRY ARRIVESwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=100Thanks for the great feedback and reading along. I hope you've enjoyed the bumpy ride!
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Post by Zam on Mar 13, 2012 1:26:59 GMT -5
Thanks Joanna. I had no idea what Tom Chroust looked like so it's nice to put a face to him. You mean to tell me that Clarissa has been sporting that same hairstyle for 12 years, yikes.... Here's a pic I took of Tom at the GOOL event in NYC two years ago. Handsome fellow. And super nice!
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Post by Zam on Mar 12, 2012 21:50:53 GMT -5
Danke! .....well apart from leaving it on another clifhanger!! *curtseys*
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Post by Zam on Mar 10, 2012 3:45:26 GMT -5
Anybody curious what happened after the gunshot? Find out now. You may want to break out the kevlar first. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-SEVEN - TELL ME WHAT I WANT TO HEARwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=99Our first reader's open speculation was revealed today. Find out the truth pretty darn soon! Thanks for reading all this time ... everything that came before is leading up to these moments in the story.
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Post by Zam on Mar 3, 2012 3:39:20 GMT -5
Want to know what happens after Olli learned Alex's secret? Read it here. At your peril. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-SIX - TROUBLE WITH A CAPITAL "T"www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=98Thanks so much for all the great feedback and for all my readers! We might even see this change again soon...
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Post by Zam on Feb 25, 2012 2:20:08 GMT -5
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Post by Zam on Feb 18, 2012 0:07:54 GMT -5
The LDK may have been late to the party last time, someone's unsettling dreams prove meaningful. They jump right into action. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-FOUR - SENDING OUT AN S.O.S.www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=95Lots of exciting things coming up very, very, very soon. Thank you for reading and for the nice words! We might even see this change again soon...
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Post by Zam on Feb 14, 2012 2:02:57 GMT -5
The new chapter's a little late, so but a distress call is received late too. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY-THREE - BLASTED! FOILED AGAIN!www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=94Thanks for reading and for the really great words of support! They're greatly appreciated!
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Post by Zam on Feb 5, 2012 0:02:39 GMT -5
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Post by Zam on Jan 29, 2012 21:18:52 GMT -5
Here's two more chapters for you all, like I promised last week. Now that I've got all my chess pieces characters in place for the next part of the story, let the game resume... In the first, a party rages. In the second, it's a dark and stormy night. Enjoy! CHAPTER EIGHTY - PUT ON A HAPPY FACEwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=91CHAPTER EIGHTY-ONE - I JUST CALLED TO SAY...www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=92We've reached the (beginning of) climax of the story. Thank you all for making it this far. Hold on, it's going to be a bumpy and perilous ride. Don't forget about those story warnings! Thanks for all the awesome feedback!
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Post by Zam on Jan 22, 2012 16:27:29 GMT -5
Just a few words to a great person, good friend and exceptional author I hope to meet one day... HAPPY BIRTHDAY ZAM!!!!!!!!!! Thanks Gely! I'm really really trying to save my pennies for July but I won't know for sure for a couple months. And if it is your birthday, Zam; HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Thanks Karina! Appreciate it!
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Post by Zam on Jan 21, 2012 14:05:47 GMT -5
As promised, two more chapters this week! Time to stir the pot of mystery a bit. In the first, we have an easily picked lock. In the second, we have a surprisingly edible lunch. Enjoy! CHAPTER SEVENTY-EIGHT - AN UNKNOWN SOMEONEwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=89CHAPTER SEVENTY-NINE - WELCOMING ARMSwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=90It's nice to see the imagined naughtiness of the last chapters prompted some nice responses. Thanks, as always, for reading along. The chess pieces have been set for the big finale...coming soon.
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Post by Zam on Jan 14, 2012 21:25:49 GMT -5
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Post by Zam on Jan 7, 2012 23:41:31 GMT -5
Happy New Year (better late than never?) One of my 2012 resolutions is to wake up the bunnies and finish up my Chrolli stories. here bunny, bunny! Here bunny, bunny! Come out, come out, wherever you are!Can't wait to see what you have in store for us! Thanks, Zam! Intense! Love it! Thanks very much!
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Post by Zam on Jan 7, 2012 20:04:43 GMT -5
Many apologies for the unplanned hiatus with my story. Most of it was procrastination. I wasn't in the mood to edit. (stupid job!) However, I was giving some thought to the chapters at the end of the story (which I'm about to begin writing shortly) and updating my outline. Good stuff coming! I promise TWO chapters next week. I hope everyone had a nice relaxing time over their holidays! I was certainly taking it easy. ;D Now...where were we in the story? Oh, yes! Let's catch up with a couple of our friends after the meeting at the warehouse. Enjoy! CHAPTER SEVENTY-FIVE - POST-COITALwww.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=609&chapter=85Many thanks for diligently reading along with the story all this time. Lots of great and exciting things on the horizon. thanks also for the great feedback! Cheers!
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Post by Zam on Jan 2, 2012 21:49:05 GMT -5
Their 'anniversary' is a tough one although even for the cabin it's still a little premature. So when is it really? First time they met? Already passed in November. Cabin? Nothing physical happened even if emotions started to surface in Olli. The locker room kiss? Not the most romantic of moments albeit the awakening of feelings in Christian. The first time? A wonderful juncture in their relationship but the aftermath somehow cancels that one out. The second time? When Christian finally admits to Olli (and himself) that he has fallen in love with him. The real start of their partnership. That would make it April. Their wedding? Months out for that. So none of the dates exactly pass to this VL anniversary except perhaps the cabin which has been a symbol of their love on occassion and is about to be again. It's the anniversary of the first time they stopped hating each other. That's my guess.
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Post by Zam on Jan 2, 2012 21:48:02 GMT -5
Thank you for the preview Joanna and Lugia. And poor Nico. Wish it was Helena that was gonna throw herself off a bridge. I wouldn't miss her. I'd be satisfied if Helena tried to push Nico off the bridge, but Nico grabbed her hand and they both died. Looking forward the the day this idiotic story is FINALLY over! It started off GREAT but went to hell after about a week when the only thing the writers did was show that flashback over and over and over again. Ugh! Then maybe somebody could push Lugwig, Tristan and Marlene off the bridge too. Looking forward to Chrolli wedding 2.0
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Post by Zam on Dec 22, 2011 23:08:42 GMT -5
Bel..that was amazing.....thank you so much. Zam....you are scaring me with yours!!! However I am hooked!! It's such an intense ride! It's fun to frighten. ;D Conflict just spices up the adventure.
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