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Post by xsharon90x on May 30, 2010 5:49:06 GMT -5
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Post by queenmab126 on May 30, 2010 5:49:15 GMT -5
Aww, that was so cute! A bit OOC, but cute nontheless.
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Post by xsharon90x on May 30, 2010 5:50:59 GMT -5
Cute is the right word  And by reading the comments of the other story that have been posted here by dannybaby, I would say we have to thank him for the idea |
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Post by queenmab126 on May 30, 2010 5:59:30 GMT -5
Gosh, now I'll force myself to read at least 1 or 2 Aarson fics, maybe that way they'll win me over. I just can't be stucked on AA this much xD
*Scampers off to read random bits*
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Post by xsharon90x on May 30, 2010 6:24:40 GMT -5
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Post by danglinghearts on May 31, 2010 10:52:41 GMT -5
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Post by xsharon90x on May 31, 2010 11:38:01 GMT -5
Thanks for posting danglinghearts.. but is it just me or is the link not working? Edit: But I found it another way |
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Post by danglinghearts on May 31, 2010 13:36:19 GMT -5
xsharon90x must be you , link's working fine for me.
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 31, 2010 14:05:20 GMT -5
danglingheartsOh my god, I love you, smutty fics are my favourite and it is really well written 
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Post by xsharon90x on May 31, 2010 14:58:09 GMT -5
xsharon90x must be you , link's working fine for me. Yes, I thought so  I noticed it before.. one time livejournal links don't work for me, and another time they do.. like now: I tried it another time, and now it works perfectly And thanks for making it a smutty fanfic, now dannybaby1234 is totally happy again  |
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 31, 2010 15:14:00 GMT -5
Oh damn right ;D
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Post by danglinghearts on May 31, 2010 17:00:51 GMT -5
@dannybaby1234 smutty fics are my favourite too. But man, it's hard to write. I think I'm really good at it, but you guys seem to like it, so I'm not stopping any time soon. xsharon90x livejournal has been acting weird for me too in the past week or so. Mostly I just refresh and then it works. There seems to be quite some ED fic out there, but I find it's mostly badly written, which bothers me a lot. Lots of spelling mistakes and strange word use. Which sucks, cause I really like smutty fic too and my own doesn't really do it for me when I already know what's gonna happen. |
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 31, 2010 17:04:47 GMT -5
@dannybaby1234 smutty fics are my favourite too. But man, it's hard to write. I think I'm really good at it, but you guys seem to like it, so I'm not stopping any time soon. Woohoo ;D Yes you are really good at it, And ever fic is so different, which keeps me as a reader, very entertained I'm glad you're not stopping anytime soon, don't know what I would do without a bit of smut  |
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Post by sooky on May 31, 2010 17:27:56 GMT -5
danglinghearts: hm, strange. I find it best when I write it myself... (Then I don't care whether it's written well or not, mostly it's horrible afterwards but I delete it and the world looks fine again!) But I'm not up for much smutreading anyway. I live for plot.
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Post by brencon on May 31, 2010 17:41:46 GMT -5
I'm off the opinion that smut is good, if only it further's the plot. Having said that, some smut just has to written/read! |
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 31, 2010 18:27:57 GMT -5
I'm just a smut freak ;D |
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Post by danglinghearts on Jun 1, 2010 5:29:43 GMT -5
@dannybaby1234 Huh, I actually meant I think I'm NOT very good at writing the sex. Should hire a beta for all my writing, or maybe read over before I submit. But I find it very hard to judge the quality of my own work. sooky and brencon I usually prefer good plot too, and smut when it fits in it, but sometimes I just need a good fix of smut and don't want to bother with plot. That said, I can't seem to write too much out of character and without plot. Then again, I'm only a beginner in this. |
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Post by brencon on Jun 1, 2010 9:03:58 GMT -5
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Post by dannybaby1234 on Jun 1, 2010 9:30:39 GMT -5
@dannybaby1234 Huh, I actually meant I think I'm NOT very good at writing the sex. Should hire a beta for all my writing, or maybe read over before I submit. But I find it very hard to judge the quality of my own work. Oh but you ARE very good at writing it, the smut is perfect, so keep up the good work ;D |
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Post by xsharon90x on Jun 1, 2010 10:59:25 GMT -5
Great update brencon only I saw one little mistake: 'Aaron rested his hand upon Aaron's chest, stroking circles into the older man's chest.'I think Aaron rested his hand upon Jackson's chest |
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Post by dannybaby1234 on Jun 1, 2010 11:10:01 GMT -5
Thank god you noticed it, I was too into the fic that I didn't even spot it |
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Post by brencon on Jun 1, 2010 12:59:26 GMT -5
Cheers! I didn't notice and I'd proof read it a few times!
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Post by dannybaby1234 on Jun 1, 2010 13:07:54 GMT -5
The fic is still brilliant brencon ;D
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Post by xsharon90x on Jun 1, 2010 14:46:00 GMT -5
Well, I was reading the fic and then I had something like: Huh? Aaron rested his hand on Aaron's chest Normally I don't notice it either, but well I thought I mention it.. but indeed it's still a brilliant fanfic.. |
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Post by dannybaby1234 on Jun 1, 2010 14:50:44 GMT -5
Well as mentioned in the General discussion, I have an idea for a fic called: Hammers & Spanners.
Which would include; Jackson with his builder's hat on, Aaron in his dirty mechanic overalls, going at it in the back of somebody else's car.
;D
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And by reading the comments of the other story that have been posted here by dannybaby, I would say we have to thank him for the idea 
I noticed it before.. one time livejournal links don't work for me, and another time they do.. like now: I tried it another time, and now it works perfectly 
