nomdeplume8ie
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"Well, if I can't boink you, I'm just going to have to boink the rest of your family,no exceptions."
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Post by nomdeplume8ie on May 10, 2010 19:55:26 GMT -5
That sounds quite interesting sooky. I definitely welcome the element of magic in fanfic.
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 11, 2010 7:42:40 GMT -5
Sounds interesting Sooky, I like all the different genres of fanfic ;D
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Post by xsharon90x on May 11, 2010 9:19:34 GMT -5
It's indeed the nice thing of fanfic.. you can do whatever you want.. And Sooky it definitly sounds interesting..
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Post by queenmab126 on May 11, 2010 9:24:26 GMT -5
I would love as well to see where it goes. And yeah, AA being involved makes it impossible for me not to like it I'm thinking about writing something too. But I need a bit more 'confidence' with aaron. He's so difficult to write about, in my opinion, and I just hate when stories go wrong about the character's personality.
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 11, 2010 9:36:10 GMT -5
Well what I do, if I want the character to change slightly is set it a bit into the future, so the character may have developed some more
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Post by jonniebuk on May 12, 2010 18:29:01 GMT -5
Just checking!
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 12, 2010 18:48:44 GMT -5
Why, do you desperately want some smut?
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Post by jonniebuk on May 12, 2010 19:22:25 GMT -5
Why, do you desperately want some smut? Not desperately! But a bit of smt before bed is always welcome - makes for pleasant dreams!
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 12, 2010 19:39:34 GMT -5
I'll see what I can do ;D
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 12, 2010 19:46:27 GMT -5
Andy/Ryan fic ;D Be warned, very smutty!!!
Best Friends Turned Lovers
"What's this place called again?" Andy asked him.
"West something I think," Ryan said.
"There it is," Andy said as he pointed to lights that shone with the words 'Bar West'.
"Nice one, I didn't realise it was so close," Ryan replied.
Together they quickly marched across the road, the fresh air sobering them up slightly. When they joined the queue to get in, they didn't notice anything strange at first. No, it wasn't until they got inside and saw the certain people in there and the video playing on the screens behind the bar that they realised... they were in a Gay club.
"Don't think you'll get lucky in here mate," Andy said with a smile to Ryan.
Ryan laughed, "Never say never Andy," he added with a wink before putting his arm around his shoulder.
"What you doing?" Andy asked with a drunken smile.
"Well I figure you can be my boyfriend for the night. Save us any unwanted attention."
Andy thought about it for a minute, "Good idea," he said before walking over to the bar, "So you going to buy me a drink lover of mine?" Ryan laughed and pulled out his wallet in order to buy them both a drink. The guy behind the bar gave him a wink as he served him and Ryan couldn't help but smile. It was just too funny.
There idea of pretending to be a couple worked for the most part. Some guys did try their luck, but if Andy was getting harassed, Ryan would just step in and tell them to bog off, and Andy would do the same for him. They drank and danced and drank and played pool and drank some more before finally at three o'clock they were kicked out. Begrudgingly they left and hopped in a taxi back to their shared house in the village.
"Hurry up I need to piss," Andy said as Ryan fumbled with the keys.
That of course only made Ryan laugh and drop the keys.
"Stop laughing, it's not funny,"
"Now that's where you're wrong," Ryan said as he finally got the door open.
Andy rushed inside and ran to the bathroom. Ryan smiled and locked the door up again. He didn't know where he was going to sleep tonight, as his room had been flooded by that Jackson knocking though a pipe in the house next door. He walked over to the fridge and pulled out a couple of beers. He opened his and waited for Andy to come back from the bathroom.
"Oh cheers mate," Andy said as he accepted the beer.
Ryan gave him a silent toast with his can before he gulped most of it down.
"Shit, now I need a slash,"
Andy smiled and shook his head as Ryan ran passed him. He sipped his beer a couple more times before he realised he wasn't in the mood for it anymore. So leaving it on the counter he kicked off his shoes and began walking up the stairs to his room. He met Ryan on the way.
"I'm just gonna head off to bed," Andy said, "You might as well kip in with me, no use letting a double bed go to waste."
"Yeah, might as well. Cheers mate," Ryan said as he let out a yawn.
Andy nodded and together the two relatively new best friends made their way up the stairs and into Andy's large bedroom.
It always surprised Ryan how he and Andy had become so close so quickly, it was like they had known each other for years.
Andy walked round to the far side of the bed and began getting undressed. Ryan watched him for a moment before turning his back and undressing too. For some reason the sight of Andy's bare back and firm backside in his black boxers had sparked something in him and he could feel himself getting semi-hard.
"You alright mate?" Andy asked as he climbed into the bed.
"Uh, yeah," Ryan said as he quickly stripped down to his boxers and climbed into bed, without turning his body towards Andy.
"You sure? It's just that you look a bit jumpy," Andy said as he propped himself up on an elbow and stared at Ryan. Ryan's bare chest was glistening in the faint light and Andy thought he looked kind of pretty. What? Where had that come from?
"I'm just a bit drunk mate. I'll be fine," Ryan said as he looked up at him.
Andy was really close to him to him now. He didn't know why or what compelled him to do it, but he reached out a hand and ran his fingers through Andy's messy mop of hair. Andy groaned as he did so, he hadn't been touched in such a long time and he was loving the feeling of light and gentle fingers caressing him.
"Ryan?" he asked quietly.
"Shh," Ryan said as he pulled him down towards him.
Andy knew what was happening, he knew that he could have stopped him if he wanted to, but he didn't want to. For some reason this just felt so right. He let his lips fall gently onto Ryan's. Ryan held Andy's head gently but firmly whilst his other hand snaked round Andy's back and caressed his spine.
He couldn't help himself.
Ryan was creating wonderful feelings with his hand and tongue and 'Oh my God,' Ryan was a very good kisser.
"You okay?" Ryan asked nervously as they pulled apart.
"Yeah," Andy smiled, "I'm more than okay," he added before he leaned down and kissed Ryan again. Only this time things started to heat up. He allowed Ryan to push his underwear off before he sat back and pulled off Ryan's. Once they were both naked it seemed to hit them just what was happening. And they suddenly felt a hell of a lot sober than they had done just fifteen minutes ago.
"Is it wrong that this doesn't feel weird?" Andy asked him as he crawled forward slowly and wrapped a hand around Ryan's throbbing dick, it was the first time he had ever touched a dick that wasn't his own... but it felt so right. The moment Andy touched Ryan's hard cock it began to leak with precum.
Ryan smiled, "No, it's completely right that this doesn't feel at all weird," he gasped slightly as Andy kissed and licked at his neck softly whilst Andy was pumping him hard and fast, Ryan thought that nobody had ever wanked him off as good as Andy.
"It's the way it's meant to be."
Andy nodded before devouring his mouth again. Ryan tried to work his hand between them to pleasure Andy like he was pleasuring him. But Andy wouldn't let him. Instead he crawled off of Ryan and reached over into his bedside table and pulled out a half empty tube of lube. Ryan raised a questioning eyebrow at him.
"What? I use it when I'm here on my own sometimes, gives wanking that more realistic feeling, it feels like someone's giving me the most amazing head. Just like I want you to suck me off and swallow all of my hot, juicy and creamy cum… right now."
"Sure, but you can forget about the blowjob... for tonight anyway." Ryan smirked.
"Whatever, now would you rather do it without the lube?" Andy asked him with a similar smirk.
"Shut up," Ryan said as he rolled on top of Andy.
Andy laughed before kissing him hard, "Sit up," he said and Ryan did as he was told, sitting up and straddling Andy's thighs. Andy spread some lube onto his hands before spreading it over his now rock hard, precum leaking cock. Ryan licked his lips at the sight. There was something about it that was just beautiful.
"Come here," Andy said as he sat up slightly. Ryan leaned forward towards Andy's manly chest and was rewarded with a kiss full of tongue and a finger shoved right up his virgin ass. He shivered slightly at the cold feeling that he hadn't been expecting.
"That's a bit cheeky," he smiled.
Andy smiled back up at him, "You don't know the half of it,"
Ryan kissed him again and Andy placed both hands on his hips, encouraging him to move forward. Ryan sat up a bit.
He placed his hands on top of Andy's that were still on his hips and looked him in the eye as he began to lower himself onto Andy's dick. It wasn't exactly pleasurable. In fact, it was far from it and he let Andy know this by hissing out at the sheer pain.
"You okay?" Andy asked, trying to stop his eyes from rolling back in his head at the most pleasurable feeling he's ever had.
"Yeah, just gimme a second," Ryan said, eyes shut and breathing hard.
Andy sat there and gently run his fingers up and down Ryan's sides, and gently rubbed his strong farm boy hands all over Ryan's cock, keeping it as hard as a rock but also trying to get him to relax. Finally it worked and Ryan began to rock slowly.
"Oh... fuck," Andy said as he felt Ryan begin to slide up and down on his pole.
Ryan didn't say much, but he did pant very heavily as he grabbed onto Andy's hands again and used them as leverage so he could ride him as hard as he wanted. "Jesus Andy... fuck me, fuck me harder!" Ryan then released one of his hands from Andy's so he could stroke his now throbbing dick.
Andy began to eagerly thrust up with Ryan's downward movements, letting him go deeper and hitting that 'oh so special' spot that they had both thought was only a myth. Ryan let out a small yelp as he felt Andy hit his prostate, then he groaned deeply when he did it again. He began moving as fast and as hard as he could then, not able to stop as he felt his orgasm building.
"Oh shit Andy," he cried out, as his cum exploded all over himself and Andy.
That did it for Andy, he couldn't hold back any longer and now that Ryan was almost passed out he realised he needed to take charge, so he turned them so that Ryan was on his back, legs wrapped tight around Andy's waist allowing Andy to pound into him as hard as he could. The bed was banging against the wall, but all Andy cared about right now was the tightening feeling in his balls. "Fuck... I'm cumming," screamed Andy.
He then shot his juicy load into Ryan's no longer virgin ass, collapsing on top of Ryan, unable and unwilling to move off him.
"You okay?" Ryan asked with a soft chuckle as he stroked Andy's very sweaty hair. Andy looked up at him and smiled, "Just so you know, I am never letting you out of my bed... ever, ever, again," he said before he kissed Ryan. "Now, about that blowjob..."
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Post by xsharon90x on May 13, 2010 5:33:29 GMT -5
Dannybaby you did a very good job!! It's well written, and hot..
BTW Andy is the guy which was with Ryan when they spotted Aaron outside Bar West, isn't he?
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Post by jonniebuk on May 13, 2010 7:28:25 GMT -5
@ Dannybaby[/color]
Great writing mate. 10 out of 10
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 13, 2010 8:33:04 GMT -5
Thanks very much, glad you liked it ;D and yes xsharon90x that was Andy, and now he and Ryan live together
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sooky
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Post by sooky on May 13, 2010 9:41:44 GMT -5
Danny, Danny, Danny... Smut is sooo correct. What did you write the first few paragraphs for? (EDIT: Not sure if you wanted criticism. It's more of a... smut...thing, really, so I figured probably not.) And we should rename this thread. To "Emmerdale Fanfiction", because it's clearly not only A&A or even Aaron. I'm for it, anyway, then we have ONE big Fanfic collection and not split up into Aarson and everything else. Oh, and I'm writing the Crackfic. Rite nao. >D Beware!
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 13, 2010 9:49:54 GMT -5
Thanks very much, and yes I was thinking about changing the name also AND can't wait for your next fic, I'm on the edge of my seat
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sooky
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Post by sooky on May 13, 2010 10:38:58 GMT -5
Crack, no crack... In any case, this will be crack to come, so to tease you all a little, this little piece of writing is all yours. And remember... be careful what you pray for - you might just get it... (And I've read all the things you ever wrote in the emmerdale boards. Believe me.)
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 13, 2010 10:40:56 GMT -5
Ha ;D Well I will give it a read now EDIT - Read it and Loved it, can't wait for the next chapter ;D
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Post by queenmab126 on May 13, 2010 12:35:35 GMT -5
Loved it so much! the core instinct of every living thing is the determination to survive and in moments like these, the conscious part of the brain collapses, leaving only room for raw emotions, instincts. How terrific is this piece in particular? Great, I just can't wait for the next chapter. Constructive criticism...uhm...write faster can be one?
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 13, 2010 15:04:47 GMT -5
I like that, write faster please :-P
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brencon
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Post by brencon on May 13, 2010 18:41:13 GMT -5
Love it, great start can't wait to read more! Crack, no crack... In any case, this will be crack to come, so to tease you all a little, this little piece of writing is all yours. And remember... be careful what you pray for - you might just get it... (And I've read all the things you ever wrote in the emmerdale boards. Believe me.)
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sooky
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Post by sooky on May 13, 2010 19:54:08 GMT -5
Ah... Could I write any faster? Driven by the need to digest the awesome episode today, I've already written the next chapter. I'm really beginning to like the story. D: Which might be a bad sign. Whatever - good sign the title's been changed, hooray! But that doesn't interest you, does it? You're waiting for the fic! Enjoy! Edit: Sorry, my bad - wrong link. Fixed nao
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brencon
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Post by brencon on May 14, 2010 5:00:10 GMT -5
That's another fantastic update! Love this turn of events! More soon please!
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Post by xsharon90x on May 14, 2010 9:59:30 GMT -5
Sooky your fics are absolutely amazing! It's really fun to read a fic that's a little supernatural in combination with Aaron's story. I love to read more of them Thanks for taking the time of writing these and other fics!
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Post by queenmab126 on May 14, 2010 11:46:04 GMT -5
Argh, you're evil, leaving us all hanging I'm becoming boring, but I'll still say I loved it and can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Post by dannybaby1234 on May 14, 2010 14:31:26 GMT -5
Loving the fic sooky, can't wait for the next update
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