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Post by Jp on May 26, 2009 21:27:14 GMT -5
Liz: I really liked that, I love the little inside thoughts of Christian that you added. I could actually picture Gregor and Olli sitting there Zam: I hope your new story doesn't interfere with your 'scary ollian' challenge XXIV: “Good morning baby” Olli said into Gregor’s ear the next morning. “Are you up for a little fun this morning?” Oliver asked as he straddled Gregor quickly, causing him to fully wake up. “Fun huh?” Gregor smiled and their lips met each other quickly. Oliver switched up the kisses, first starting at Gregor’s mouth, and slowly moved to his neck. Gregor smiled as he felt his husband’s warm breath up against his own neck. Gregor shuddered as he felt Olli’s hands move down his back, slowly scratching his back with his nails, leaving small marks along his back. “Olli” Gregor huffed as Oliver continued to kiss down Gregor’s chest, and then moving to his lower stomach. Gregor ran his hands through his own hair and laid his head back against the pillow. He closed his eyes and felt his lover find his way down to his manhood. Without any hesitation, Olli was playing with Gregor’s joystick in his mouth. Gregor, not about to contain himself, let out a loud, barbaric moan. Olli decided to make his way back up to Gregor’s chest, making Gregor swoon as he felt Olli’s tongue explore his body. “Oh baby, you still got it” Gregor said gripping onto Olli’s back. “Take me away!” Olli whispered into Gregor’s ear. The man looked at his lover and all he could do was smile. -- “So I’ll see you later? We can start what happened last night?” Gregor asked as Olli grabbed the car keys and was standing in the arch of the door. “Eight o’clock” Olli said with a smile. Christian walked in and saw the two men smiling like little schoolboys. “What are you smiling about?” Christian asked his brother. “Nothing!” Gregor said quickly. -- “Eight, forty-five” Gregor said with a sigh as he sat on the couch waiting for Olli, wondering where he was. Gregor looked up when he heard a knock at the door. He got up from the couch, ran to the door and opened it slowly. This tall man, with an officer’s suit was at the door, “Is this the Mann household?” the man asked and Gregor nodded. “I’m sorry sure, but your husband is in the hospital, he had an accident on his way home.” “What is he alright? Can I go see him? Please!” Gregor said as he furiously wiped away at a tear that had made its way onto his cheek. “Yes sir, I can take you there now, if you please” Gregor nodded. “Christian” Gregor yelled. Christian appeared at the door. “Watch Peter please, Olli is in the hospital” “What? What happened?” Christian asked quickly. “I don’t know, I’ll call you when I learn something” Gregor said and then left with the man. -- Gregor walked into the hospital room and saw Olli sitting there in the hospital bed, helpless. “Olli” Gregor said softly, running to the bed. “What happened baby?” Gregor cried.
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Post by Jp on May 26, 2009 20:35:53 GMT -5
JP: Here is the cast: Will Chase as Roger Davis Adam Kantor as Mark Cohen Michael McElroy as Tom Collins Rodney Hicks as Benjamin Coffin III Tracie Thoms as Joanne Jefferson Justin Johnston as Angel Dumott-Schunard Renee Elise Goldsberry as Mimi Marquez Eden Espinosa as Maureen Johnson Marcus Paul James as Mr. Jefferson Gwen Stewart as Mrs. Jefferson and the Seasons of Love soloist Jay Wilkison as Gordon Shaun Earl as Paul Andrea Goss as Alexi Darling Telly Leung as Steve Tracy McDowell as Mark's Mom The girl who plays Maureen was a sub for Idina Menzel in Wicked, so she looks very much like her and has a voice like her's too. None are the original Broadway cast like Anthony Rapp or anything, but some of them were swings for the main roles or were in the tours etc. Yeah I realized that *sigh* Yeah Edina (if that was Idina's understudy) she also played Elphaba in Wicked, I think in the UK, from what I've heard. I saw Wicked, and the girl who played Elphaba, sounded EXACTLY like Idina. Thea Gill did an amazing job! I felt so sad for her character when her husband came out. Dan Payne is a HOTTIE I agree! More of him, what else has he been in?
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 19:19:31 GMT -5
JP: It was fantastic most of the people playing the characters have played them over the years as back ups and such, Tracie Thoms played Joanne (she played her in the movie as well), it was fantastic. When RENT came to Calgary last summer I saw it, Heinz Winkler (who won South Africa Idol) played Roger, I love that man, he's sexy and he can sing. It has a few documentaries and such as well. I love RENT it has been a staple in my life for like 13 years. It is inspiring, joyous, sad and pushed a lot of boundaries when it first came out. Jonathan Larson was a genius and it is so sad that he died right before the first performance. "Measure your life in love." My fav Maureen will always be Idina Menzel, no ifs ands or buts about it. Yeah that Austrialian guy you mentioned is hot lol! Tracie Thoms is hilarious, and I love Idina Menzel's Maureen as well = amazing! Which characters were not played by the original broadway cast, besides joanne?
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 15:11:48 GMT -5
CJ4 + ZAM: you see, I'm not crazy! It is cute ! XXIII: “Christian wake up, little brother, it’s seven thirty, you need to get ready for school,” a young Gregor said to his brother who was still sleeping in his bed. Christian rubbed his eyes and opened them slowly, “Where’s mommy?” he asked his older brother who was sitting on the bed next to him. “She’s not home,” Gregor said looking down. “Why? I want mommy!” Christian said and he began to cry into his pillow. “It’s okay, Chris, please don’t cry. It’ll be alright, I’m here,” Gregor said as he stroked Christian’s hair and pulled the cover of him. “Go back to sleep, don’t worry about school” Christian nodded and grabbed his brother’s hand and held it, making sure not to let go. About ten minutes later, Christian was asleep and Gregor freed himself from his brother’s grasp and went to call the school, to tell them that neither him nor his brother would be in school today. ~~ “Gregor, what’s up? Why weren’t you in school today? You missed huge exams,” a young Leonard said over the phone to Gregor. “My little brother needed me,” Gregor said, looking at his brother who had just walked into the family dinning room. -- “Christian? Can you do me a favor? Please? Do you mind watching Peter for the night?” Gregor asked as he held the baby in his arms. Christian nodded, “Sure bro” it was the least that he could honestly do. Gregor handed Christian, Peter, and then left without Peter noticing. “So little man, are you hungry? Or do you want to play with uncle Christian first?” Christian asked his nephew. Peter nodded when Christian said ‘play with uncle Christian’. Christian giggled at his nephew and then grabbed a small ball that had a power ranger’s design on it, and rolled it to Peter. Peter giggled and grabbed the ball, and threw it to Christian. -- “So how was my little man?” “I was alright, thanks for asking” Christian laughed when Gregor hit his arm playfully. “He was all right, though, he fell asleep an hour or so ago, and he ate some chicken and some French fries for dinner” Christian said with a grin. “If he keeps having dinners like those every night, he will turn out to be chubby,” Gregor said as he hit Christian’s stomach playfully. Christian smiled, “Gregor, you’re a great dad” “Thanks!” “Well I’m off to bed, goodnight!” Christian said quickly, turned on his heel and then walked to his bedroom. Once inside, “A really great dad!” That night, Gregor and Christian both fell asleep with a smile on their faces.
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 14:56:10 GMT -5
re: MulligansI saw it and gave my thoughts on page 22 of this thread, but I did like it, but it could have been better. Some things were not explored that should have been in my opinion, and other things were focused on to the detriment of some things. But, it was appealing. And yes, for me, the father, Nathan, (actor Dan Payne) was the best part of the movie. ;D Dan Payne was the best part! I saw your comments on page 21, and I agree, some things should have been mentioned more. Overall, I enjoyed the movie though I recently bought the DVD of RENT's final performance on Broadway, I love it even more now. I need to buy that performance!
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 0:27:24 GMT -5
I get a Snuggie then they do this to me.... Now I want one..... the things they come up with
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 0:24:36 GMT -5
cttgsr - this is the place to talk about any movie I'm undecided about Mulligans - I've seen a few clips and compilation clips and I'm kinda wondering if I've seen the best there is to see from the movie. I think the actor who plays the father is really handsome ( for a middle aged guy) but the actor who plays the son's best friend doesn't really appeal to me " shrugs" therefore I don't really get that emotional buzz from it. That's not to say I won't end up buying it!! Yes, the older male is very attractive! I personally enjoyed the movie
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Post by Jp on May 25, 2009 0:23:20 GMT -5
LIz I agree with the others thtat wa a beautifully written chapter.
Can someone tell me why when I read over what I wrote, I sound really dumb?
ANYWHOO! It looks like undecided is coming along in the show....
watch the clip at: 6:02-6:17 and tell me that there is no resemblence to "Undecided"
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Post by Jp on May 24, 2009 15:08:17 GMT -5
Just watched my first episode of American Idol ever. (I know, I know... but Ryan Seacrest bugs the hell out of me.) I have only one thing to say: = Am I wrong? Okay, going back to catch up on the last few pages.... I totally agree! Wow what a resemblence Okay, I am so happy that Kris won, I think he actually deserved it, not saying that ADAM didnt or anything. But I just thought that Kris was the better candidate. He was really modest about everything and I think that Adam kind of took it to the head with the 'fame'. No doubt thought they will both be really great recording artistist. The top two on all of the seasons have done really well (well mostly the winner but whatever). For example, Kelly is still out, rubben is on broadway, fantasisa I have no idea with ups with her, Carrie is definatly still around, Taylor is around but I think he lost his contract so I'm not sure, Jordin has some new music out, David is out with new music, and not doubt that Kris ( and Adam, and even probably all the other top 13) will be out with their own CD shortly. So Kris will mostly likely not be forgotten. Anyways, don't fight with me, I was just expressing my views
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Post by Jp on May 24, 2009 15:02:40 GMT -5
So I don't know if I should post this reply here of just start a new thread, becausse last time I tried to start one about RENT but I was told not to so I'll just write here Anyways, what about the movie Mulligans? I recently saw it and I fell in love with it. It was so sad when Nathan finally told Chase that he thought he was gay. Illoved it! What do you guys (and girls) think?
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Post by Jp on May 24, 2009 3:23:19 GMT -5
Karina: do you remeber..... "Karina... the queen of suspense"? I'm sorry, I am working on the next chapter as fast as I can, but Vincent keeps bugging me about this "brilliant" ( ) idea that he has of us/me writing a crossover story between VL and Twilight where one of our favorite guys is a vampire while the other one is a werewolf, they fall in love and have to deal with their families being against them coupling up, etc, etc Hopefully, chap. 18 of 'Bleeding Love' will be up tonight And you're welcome No, karina don't worry! I was just asking if you remebered the name that we gave you, somehwere in the beginning of this thread. Oh and Twilight and VL? ugh! Edward I'm sure i'd love it though
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Post by Jp on May 23, 2009 13:58:15 GMT -5
Zam: No problem! Nice converting VHS into DVD! I still have to figure out how to do that. Any tips? If you get a chance definately see Mulligans! It almost made me cry nitty: POST PICTURES = no problem, your poem was amazing though, no lie! EVERYONE ELSE WHO COMMENTED MY STORY ON THE ARCHIVE THAT I DIDNT MENTION (KARINA & KES) THANKS SO MUCH, IT MEANS THE WORLD TO ME! ;D Karina: do you remeber..... "Karina... the queen of suspense"?
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Post by Jp on May 23, 2009 13:55:12 GMT -5
I'm not even a huge Toby fan, but I agree that they're the show's supercouple, the show is built around them, and can't really go on without them (especially if it wrote them out without ever reuniting them after an entire season apart.) Your right, they should really keep the characters on. I also liked the little relationship between Kai and Gabriel (that was their names right?) Anyways, I enjoy the show.
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Post by Jp on May 23, 2009 13:53:12 GMT -5
Don't get me wrong, I like Adam and all, but I just thought Kris should have won because Adam pretty much 'already won' if you think about it. But anyways, they will both go really far.
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 22:52:33 GMT -5
ZAM: I love the way you write, honestly, it's amazing. Teach me? Haha Here's the best lesson to give. Write every day. Stay true to yourself and your story. ENJOY writing. Edit. I think Karina and Kes and Nitty and Liz and Flippa and Eawen and CJ and the rest of the usual suspects around here have valuable lessons to teach as well. If you knew how long I agonized and despaired over the murder in front of the fireplace, it would seem ridiculous. Just like the last chapter I posted. Words can be friends and foes sometimes. I re-typed a lot of OLD writing onto the computer a couple months ago (to destroy the physical evidence)--some of it made me want to cry. And drink. Alot. You are absolutly right, everyone here writes fantastic. I just mentioned you because that was the last fic that I read. Teach me you guys *bows down* BTW I just watched the movie "Mulligans" so sad.
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 18:29:45 GMT -5
Caps Hopefully I've picked the right pic out of all of these in my quote. (cross fingers!)(I did! I did!) Doesn't Olivia look very 1940's-50's Hollywood starlet at play? The top, the hair, the lipstick. Very nice. I will brave the can of worms... Which one sounded like the infamous Williams sister champion who grunts when she hits the ball? Oops, missed the post where we were supposed to overlook that. I will extend my sympathies in advance to Nanna for the comments this video will get when she subtitles and posts it. Nanna, include a disclaimer, tell your viewers not to shoot the messenger. I was going to say, Doesn't she look like Katy Perry? I hope most of you guys know who she is.
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 18:21:22 GMT -5
I'm happy that Kris won
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 18:20:31 GMT -5
Ohhh... they wouldn't dare not ask Gregory & Charlie back!! Would they?? Awrgh..... now I'm stressing Kevin & Toby are constantly being pulled apart but they IMO are destined for each other. Gregory himself has said several times in the past that Kevin and Toby are the Ross and Rachel of Dante's Cove. "You want them to be together". So, come on here! tv! Dante's Cove w/o Kevin Archer (Gregory Michael) or Toby (can't spell his last name/ Charlie David) that is just.... not acceptable. I agree softfurbear we definatly need our Kevin and Toby.
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 18:17:43 GMT -5
Mpreg! We need fan fic! Please don't get me started! I've been thinking about doing one, but I was like: "No, I don't think we're ready for that sort of thing just yet" ;D That gives me an idea.... ;D
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Post by Jp on May 22, 2009 18:06:00 GMT -5
Nitty: YOUR POEM MADE ME GET REALLY EMOTIONAL.. I THOUGH MY NEWEST CHAPTER DID BUT YOURS JUST GOT ME OVER THE TOP! ZAM: I love the way you write, honestly, it's amazing. Teach me? Haha Everyone else, you know I love you! I'm just one person don't hate me. *gives all of you guys a cookie* so I kind of have writer's block, and i feel like writing a new story maybe a Christian story no not Christian but (Christian + Sebastian) what do you think? I know I can never just stick to Olli and Christian! aanyways; Chapter XX: “Christian Mann, I am in love with you, you make me feel complete inside. I’ve never felt this way before!” Stephen said as he woke up next to Christian the next morning. Christian listened to the words coming out of his boyfriend’s mouth and smiled, “I love you too!” and with that kisses were exchanged. “Did you end up telling Gregor about you getting back into school? I’m sure he will be thrilled!” Stephen said already knowing the answer to his question. “Not yet, I want to tell him, but he said he would do anything, so I’m trying to work this to my advantage” Christian grinned deviously. Stephen grinned and looked into Christian’s eyes, “Oh being sneaky are we? I like it…a lot” Stephen added with an extreme emphasis, after touching Christian’s leg softly. Both men looked up when they heard a knock on the door, causing Stephen to roll his eyes and Christian to laugh, “Come in!” Christian hollered towards the direction of the door. Gregor walked into the room wearing blue shorts, and a short sleeve gray shirt which had the words, ‘love is equal’ on it. “Good morning little brother, and little brother’s boy toy” Gregor said smiling as he got onto the bed, and crawled up so he was laying in between Christian and Stephen, “what were you two giggling about?” Gregor questioned curiously. “Well if you must know Gregor, it was about your brother here,” Stephen said as he smiled over at Christian. “What about this loser?” Gregor grinned as Christian laughed sarcastically. “Well it is about what I was going to tell you last night” Christian began. Gregor gave him this puppy dogface, and Christian gave up, “I decided that I’m going back to school, well we decided” Christian said with a smile. “Seriously? That’s amazing you guys, I’m so happy for you! Congrats” Gregor said as he rubbed both of their hands causing both of the men to grunt in unison. -- “Hey Chris? Do you have a minute?” Olli asked as he walked into the living room where Christian was watching some television. “Sure!” Olli walked over to the couch where he had been sitting, and sat next to his brother-in-law. “I was just wondering, why exactly are you interested in Gregor” Olli asked in a hushed tone. Christian looked at Olli, “It’s okay, he’s not home! But if you must know,” Christian said and then let this huge sigh escape his lips. “Well, I’m not sure if it’s something new, I think that I’ve liked him for a while now, I’m just telling myself that now though. It’s just that he’s the sweetest person that I’ve ever met, and he really cares about me, I’ve never had anyone care for me like he does. I remember when me and him where younger, my dad would always go out at night, get wasted, come home, get into a fight with my mother and then she would leave, which caused my dad to leave the house as well, and this would happen almost every night. Then, Gregor would turn to me and he would said ‘Christian, you should go to bed, you have school in the morning’ and this was all when we were really young, I was probably about eight or so, and he was about thirteen. He would tuck me in, kiss my forehead, and would stay in my room until I feel asleep. Then, when I woke up in the morning, sure enough he would be there with my clothes ready, lunch, and would walk me to school, so you see it’s just-“ Christian stopped to wipe a tear from his eye. “Olli, I just don’t want to feel like this anymore, please help me” Christian said as he let his tears flow down his face, and he embraced Olli in a hug causing Olli to realize what exactly about Gregor was so special, and why he was lucky to have him.
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Post by Jp on May 16, 2009 23:35:53 GMT -5
CJ: Celia sounds like the 'bestest' friend in the word! And French teacher ? ;D Ha! Christian is soo impatient though, he should calm down. AND.... THEY WERE CAUGHT IN THE ACT! poor judith Flippa: WOW! Great ending! my favorite lines were, " If I’d never walked in on you and Olli, would you ever have told me? Or would you have been happy to keep lying to me? I cast my eyes to the floor, unable to hold his gaze. The truth was, I didn’t know. If he hadn’t found us, I had no idea if or when I would have told him." He was getting to the tough tough questions!
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Post by Jp on May 16, 2009 14:39:15 GMT -5
Okay so I think I'm caught up with all of the reading? Correct? Correct! So I already commented Zam and Karina Liz: I still presonally think that Tom has quite a few problems, but that was sweet between Chris and Olli who else am I missing? Anyone? I can't think ahh! ^remeber I just came back from falling off the face of earth! so be nice! All of those Undecided fans here we go! I was very pround of myself, this chapter was a bit longer! XI: The next day, Olli woke up to the realization that he wasn’t the only one in love with his Mann, and to the fact that he was the only one home. He read a note that was on his night table, Olli I’m going with Christian and Peter to the store, we’ll be back later, and Sarah is at work. Olli smiled at the way his lover wrote him little notes like the one he had just read. However, he was upset when he saw the name Christian, Christian was going to steal his husband. “He better not do anything to him!” he said in a frustrated voice. “What if he tricks Gregor into falling in love with him? Where will I be? Probably out on the street no doubt” Olli said as he forced himself to hold back tears that were starting to form in his eyes and in his heart. Olli looked down at his hands, and smiled at his wedding ring that sparkled in the sunlight. “What am I saying? Gregor loves me! I must be crazy to think that he would want to divorce me over something this small, and Christian he’s a cool guy, why should I hate him?” Olli asked himself and then sighed when he realized he had everything that he ever wanted in life. -- Christian struggled to get his phone out of his pocket when it vibrated loudly in the store. “Hello?” he panted. On the other line was Stephen. “Baby guess what.” Stephen demanded. “I don’t know, what?” Christian asked, totally clue-less of what his boyfriend could have to tell him. “Well do you remember how you wanted to keep it a secret from Gregor, Olli and Sarah how you were thinking about going back to school? Well finishing school?” Stephen questioned in a giddy voice. “Yeah?” Christian said sounding like a little kid in a candy store. “Well you got accepted, into all of the schools you applied to” Stephen said with a giggle at the end. “Seriously?” Christian said not believing Stephen. “Yup, and tonight we’re going to celebrate, just you and me,” he said in a seductive voice. Christian smiled and uttered, “Can’t wait, I’ll talk to you later” and hung up the phone, sliding it back into his right pant’s pocket. Gregor looked at his brother and tilted his head to the right, “What’s the news?” Gregor asked. “Nothing!” Christian hummed as a grin played across his face. Nothing could bring him down now! Christian could feel this unnecessary bad energy around him, and he turned around to see where or from whom it was coming from. Sure enough, about ten feet away from him, was his uncle. Christian turned around quickly to face Gregor, “Let’s get out of here!” Christian said to him as his brother looked to see whom the younger one was talking about. Gregor nodded, grabbed Christian’s arm and dragged him out the other end of the store. “Thanks!” Christian said softly and hugged Gregor tightly, “I love you Gregor!” Christian said hoping that his brother knew that he actually meant it. -- Christian and Gregor, who was holding Peter, walked into the home about and hour or so later. “So you still won’t tell me what all of that was about will you?” Gregor asked as Christian’s phone buzzed again, “One second” he said with a smile as he answered his phone, “Yes sir?” “Sir? You should call me that more often!” Stephen grinned through the phone. “I will!” Christian added quickly. “Change of plans Hun, I tried getting the night off, but everyone else is sick and the boss won’t let me, I would just skip but he said he’d fire me, if I missed another day were I didn’t tell him that I would be out ahead of time” Stephen said which was followed by a long, loud sigh. Christian sighed as well and then answered back with, “That’s okay, I understand, I’m sure you can drop by later” Christian said hoping that Stephen knew what he was talking about. Stephen jumped at the chance, “See you later” and he hung up. Christian put his phone back into his pocket and looked at his brother who was staring at him, “Yes?” Christian asked with a laugh. “It looks like someone will be getting it tonight” Gregor grinned and punched his brother’s arm playfully. “So what is all this news? I’m dying to know. I’ll do anything to find out, just tell me,” Gregor demanded. ‘Anything?’
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Post by Jp on May 5, 2009 21:37:46 GMT -5
Chpt XX: Christian rolled over and could feel these eyes on him, like someone or something was watching him. He slowly opened his eyes and saw Stephen’s loving eyes watching him sleep. “Good morning sleepy head” Stephen said with a small giggle. Christian smiled and rubbed his eyes, and then shut them angrily, “Good morning” he mumbled in Stephen’s direction.
“How did you sleep?” Stephen asked. “Shush!” Christian demanded as he fixed the pillow and pulled the covers over his head. “Five more minutes and then I will answer all over your questions” Christian joked and Stephen sighed as he rolled out of bed and threw on his pajama pants that had come off during Christian and his nighttime activities. -- “Christian why didn’t you tell me that he did that to you?” Gregor asked looking at his younger brother. “Tell you who did what?” he asked. “Tell you why you were abused,” he said without wanting to finish the sentence. “Because-I just didn’t okay? I didn’t want to have to bring anything up” he sighed. “Christian, I’m your brother, I’m here to help you!” “I know you’re my brother, alright? Enough, I’m done with this conversation” Christian snapped back quickly. -- Christian sighed as he read the text message from Stephen:
Chris, I’m working late tonight, sorry about our date, how about tomorrow night instead? I’m sorry baby, I love you, and I’ll talk to you later.
Christian closed his phone and then put it in his pocket.
There was something there that wasn’t being told, something that needed to come out. Anything that might help this man get through it. What was wrong with him? Gregor re-read what he had written, and then scribbled it out quickly. ‘What the fuck am I writing?’ Gregor thought to himself and then slammed the book shut. -- The next morning Christian woke up better than the day before but his feelings for his brother still haunted him. It didn’t help that they were living in the same house; it was like he needed some closure.
Christian slowly rose from his bed and walked out into the kitchen in only his boxers, only to find Olli there eating cereal. “Good morning!” Olli said cheerfully. “Morning” Christian said sounding like he was still sleeping. “Where’s my brother, Peter and Sarah?” Christian asked noticing that the three of them were not there, because they were usually there in the morning. “They actually went out to buy some groceries,” Olli said quietly.
“Did you enjoy yourself a few nights ago?” Olli asked. “Surprisingly, yes” he smiled at Olli. “Olli, can I actually talk to you for a minute?” Christian asked quickly. “Sure” he said as he poured some more cereal and milk into his bowl. “Well you see, ever since I was little, in school even, I never had any easy time telling someone that I liked them. I remember one time, all the kids in my class laughed at me because I wrote this long letter to my teacher, whom I absolutely loved, and who I would do anything for. The next day, the teacher actually read it aloud in class and everyone laughed, no one in my class every talked to me again, except for two of my closest friends. So you see I’ve never really had a steady, or strong way of telling someone that I like them, or even a love life.”
“Oh wow Christian I’m really sorry about that, that must have been terrible-“ “It was” he assured.
“But you see, now it’s really bad, since I’ve been staying here, I realized that I am totally and completely in love with someone, who I know for a fact does not like me back, in a boyfriend manner that is” Christian sighed and looked up at the other man.
“Have you told him?” Olli asked not even thinking about whom he was talking about. “I can’t! It’s just not normal,” he said. “Well who is it that you like?” Olli asked looking at Christian.
‘GREGOR, GREGOR, GREGOR, GREGOR, GREGOR, MY BROTHER, GREGOR, I’M IN LOVE WITH HIM HELP ME PLEASE! SEND ME SOMEWHERE, TO A PSYCHIATRIST ANYTHING!’ Christian thought.
“Gregor” Christian sighed and looked away hoping that Olli would not be furious with him, however; he was not. Olli looked at Christian and nodded, “I see, you’re in a tough place right now huh?” he asked. Christian nodded and placed his head against the table, “I mean I don’t know why I have these feelings for him, it just sort of happened. “Well if you want, I can help you tell him” “And Stephan?”
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Post by Jp on May 4, 2009 21:45:42 GMT -5
I know what you guys are probably saying 'JP/Phill/CTTGSR you fell off the face of earth again'Sorry! Anyone know where CTTGSR/JP is? I miss him. Thanks Kes! Nitty: have fun Can't wait to read the new updates. doing that now! anyways chpt: XIX: He had the sleeves of his white shirt rolled up to his shoulders, after returning the birdie. Sarah and Olli versus Christian and Gregor. He sweat ran down the man’s already glistening muscles, oh what a sight that was. The birdie was in the air, and then thumped down onto the opposite side. Gregor and Christian were the victors. ‘We won’ Gregor said with a smile on his face. ‘I know, let’s celebrate’ Christian urged. Christian forced himself onto his brother. ‘Oh Gregor, never let me go’ “Christian, Christian, Christian, are you awake?” Gregor asked Christian, who was in a hospital bed the next morning just awaking up from a short coma. Christian could see his brother’s lips moving but couldn’t really hear anything. He sighed not knowing if anyone else in the room could hear him. In the room were himself, Gregor, Doctor Leonard, Stephen and his uncle. Sarah and Peter were at home with Olli. Christian looked at the four faces in the room and then closed his eyes. “Well he should stay in the hospital for a couple of days” Leonard said. “If you want, I can leave you guys alone for a while.” Leonard quickly left the room. Stephen and Gregor both walked up to Christian. “Are you alright?” Stephen asked as he placed a hand on Christian’s shoulder. Christian looked at his brother, “What happened?” The question made his brother burst into tears. “You had a really high blood pressure, when they tested you, you almost…. died Christian” Gregor said as he started crying. The tears were almost inaudible. Christian lifted his hand with all his strength and wiped his brother’s tears not wanting to see him cry, especially not now. Gregor turned on his heel and left the room. His uncle slowly got up and walked over to Christian. He looked at his nephew with a grin, “Need a ‘stress-reliever’?” he asked as he placed his hand just above Christian’s groan area. Christian opened his mouth slowly, and said in the raspiest voice, “Get the fuck out!” he commanded. His uncle just looked at him and started rubbing his nephew’s groan area. “I said get the fuck out!” Christian yelled. His uncle quickly left the room and Leonard Gregor and Stephen ran back into the room where Christian’s meters were spiraling out of control. He was unable to breath, and he couldn’t control his body functions. -- Stephen ran his hand down Christian’s arm and sighed as he closed his eyes in anger. “Why Christian?” Stephen asked as he kissed Christian’s hand softly and then fell asleep in his chair. Gregor had actually been able to figure out why Christian hated his uncle so much, and he had kicked his uncle out of the house. -- “Alright Christian you can go home” Leonard said as he hand Gregor some important information and some effects of some pills that Christian had taken. Stephen and Gregor left the hospital with Christian in a wheelchair. It was one time in his life where he didn’t feel like the winner of a boxing match, he felt like the loser. -- “Thanks, guys!” Christian said with a weak smile as he was helped onto the couch. “Stephen you can stay here tonight, if you want” Gregor said with a smile. Christian face lit up, he needed a friend right now, someone to be there for him at least once in his life. “Stay!” Christian said in a very raspy, low, barely audible voice. Stephen nodded and smiled at Christian.
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Post by Jp on Apr 29, 2009 21:23:43 GMT -5
Hi everyone. As a humble reader rather than a writer, there is a particular question that I'd like to put to all the authors here. Are there stories written by others that you do not like for whatever reason? I'm not asking you to name them, but when it comes to issuing feedback which of the following is the preferred option: 1. You don't refer to the story at all. 2. You give positive praise, whether you like the story or not because the fact that someone has written something is commendable in itself. 3. Tell the author what it was about their story that you didn't like here on the board. 4. Send a PM to the author regarding any dissatisfaction with the story. In other words is it better to be ignored, damned with faint praise or told the brutal truth if a story sucks or is badly written? I think I know the answer to my questions but thought I'd get confirmation anyway. For me, if there is a story that I do not like I usually won't commnt them. I will usually only comment if I have read your story and I like it. However, there are times where I tend to forget to comment a story, but that doesn't mean that I don't like said story.
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