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Post by Jp on Aug 3, 2009 22:29:53 GMT -5
I want your opinion. were would you like 'undecided' to go? Any ideas? I'd like to try and include everyones hopes for it, in the acutal story.
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Post by Jp on Aug 2, 2009 1:42:39 GMT -5
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Post by Jp on Jul 29, 2009 22:46:24 GMT -5
flygal, I was just about to post this the other day Can't wait to see the episode! Looks good! sorry if i stole your thunder ---- The episode is now up on the-n.com This is the link soccerstud_1717 gave to Riley. It would have been cool if they kept this with promotional pics Did anyone catch what the guy's name was? I dont remember them saying but according to the Profile, he is Philip Here are the yahoo profiles, quite empty and emptyAccording to the N's website Riley is a Sr. So Subtract 3 years and that's when Riley had his first gay experience with another guy (freshman/sophomore year) . And apparently he used to have some baby fat on him[/endspoiler] how did you find the profiles?? I can't wait for degrassi goes hollywood. I also like the older characters better ie. paige, ellie, marco
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Post by Jp on Jul 29, 2009 22:41:07 GMT -5
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Post by Jp on Jul 29, 2009 21:57:03 GMT -5
Karina: that dog, in that picture, is pretty cute Nitty: yeah it's just a tad weird lol. I commented on Real Love in the archive. Poor Olli Anywho... Undecided and Betrayal will hopefully have a new chapter posted by the end of the night (well for me, it's 10:56). Also, remeber an oh so perfect life? the whole sebastian/gregor/leonard thing? well i feel like continuing just their story. I'll 'revive' leonard, i didn't realize that i had killed him off, actually. but um, what do you guys think?
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Post by Jp on Jul 29, 2009 13:34:07 GMT -5
KES: have fun! i loved it! End of sentence. it was amazing:]
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Post by Jp on Jul 29, 2009 12:40:36 GMT -5
Thanks Zam for the comment on 'Betrayal' in the archive, and CJ for the comment on here They mean a lot. Hopefully the story will get better and more 'logical' later on. Karina: 'You and I' haha mom and dad! I loved them. I agree with Olli, dogs over cats :] Bull dogs tough? Ehh, I don't know. CJ: the love scene wasn't bad. they didn't waste any time though :X haha! I loved the chapter though. :] Zam: 'Weekend at the bloody horror' yeah that one Oh man, one more down. mwhahaha:X It's funny how, while something was happening in the other room, someone was getting killed. Hmm :/ Was this planned? Maybe! I don't know, we shall see Oh and the whydunit, is hard to figure out (i think you had said that in an earlier post, if not then I'm just going crazy ) 'That Look' Poor Olli, hard decision. I hate that, going from a wonderful day, to a 'sucky' day. Ugh! Nitty: This is totally off topic but, yesterday I was on google, and I had searched something that had to do with VL, and this picture came up. The picture was edited to it had text, like the ones you make have, and I saw the page that it was on, and it was myspace. I looked at the name and it said Nitty, and have your aviatar and everything. Now, I don't know if that was you or not, but if it was, your pretty:) I felt really cool finding it.
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Post by Jp on Jul 28, 2009 23:22:47 GMT -5
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Post by Jp on Jul 27, 2009 22:18:28 GMT -5
Okay so i just want to take a minute to apologize to everyone who i have 'neglected', in reviewing their story. I just revied a couple, a couple of seconds ago. I'm sorry, I just get side-tracked sometimes. Anywho, I think I'm caught up with my readings ;D ;D So that whole, vaction island, murder, run-away story that I was talking about, might be posted tomorrow. Undecided<-- don't ask about that just yet, I'm working on it, don't worry.
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Post by Jp on Jul 25, 2009 23:51:50 GMT -5
question.... about the story i was talking about, the whole stranded island. how many people do you think should be in the story (non killers)? # of killers? characters?
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Post by Jp on Jul 23, 2009 21:16:22 GMT -5
Happy 200 guys I love you all Happy b-day Karina Okay, so every time I say that I am taking a break, I just seem to come back even more. o.o >.< Anywho, I'm thinking about writing a new story....... One story, is sort of related to Zam's horror story, my old horror one, and this new movie that is coming out called "A perfect getaway". But if I write it, I will feel like I am 'stealing' Zam's thunder, if you will, so I don't know about that one. and the other, I'm not sure what it wold be about, any ideas? Dude, go for it. Steal whatever thunder you want. If you have a good idea, go with it. You should take breaks like these more often. Ha Zam! Oh man I love you for that Wow, I'm in a very loving mood today;) So yeah, I might just write that story then :] :oim really behind in my reading
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Post by Jp on Jul 23, 2009 21:04:19 GMT -5
Happy 200 guys I love you all Happy b-day Karina Okay, so every time I say that I am taking a break, I just seem to come back even more. o.o >.< Anywho, I'm thinking about writing a new story....... One story, is sort of related to Zam's horror story, my old horror one, and this new movie that is coming out called "A perfect getaway". But if I write it, I will feel like I am 'stealing' Zam's thunder, if you will, so I don't know about that one. and the other, I'm not sure what it wold be about, any ideas?
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Post by Jp on Jul 22, 2009 13:13:51 GMT -5
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Post by Jp on Jul 20, 2009 17:19:41 GMT -5
Wow I haven't signed on since the 2nd. That's really bad. But I was thinking about it, and I've been really busy, so I don't think that I am going to be signing on very often. :/ I know it's sad. So I might be taking a little 'hiatus' if you will. I will try to come back and post new chapters of undecided. I'm sorry to everyone who loves that story. And to all my friends on here, I'll try coming back And, keep on writing, just because I don't sign in or comment, doesn't mean I'm not reading.
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Post by Jp on Jul 20, 2009 17:07:46 GMT -5
He also played Pablo in the Lizzie McGuire Movie! ^^Remembering the younger years:]
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Post by Jp on Jul 2, 2009 21:53:28 GMT -5
The next chapter of Undecided is up. Chapter XXX > 30. www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=235&chapter=30 It's right there! Thanks so much to everyone who commented on the story, I've gotten so many reviews on it, I didn't think that it would be such a success
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Post by Jp on Jul 1, 2009 20:15:29 GMT -5
Chapter XXIX > 29 is up! www.nl-fiction.com/viewstory.php?sid=235&chapter=29^ you can read it there ;D *Read it at your own risk!* Liz: Aww that was sweet! It's funny, that's how I pictured the whole scene, I liked it better than the video clip! ;D I love how they always like love each other no matter what!
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Post by Jp on Jun 29, 2009 20:12:21 GMT -5
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Post by Jp on Jun 20, 2009 11:02:35 GMT -5
Just a quck little update, so I haven't really read any new updates just yet. Sorry about that! I'll post a new chapter later today possibly. I say possibly because today is someone's birthday. *cough cough=me cough cough* ;D I know it doesn't say on the site because my friend had made this account for me, and like an idiot he put his birthday instead of mine, smart right? haha anywho whatever. so yeah.... ;D
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Post by Jp on Jun 11, 2009 20:03:12 GMT -5
JP: I liked this chapter, but there is something I didn't understand. We had read in chapter XXIV (24) that Olli was late and then a policeman told Gregor that he had an accident and Gregor went to hospital, that was a part of dream too? sorry if it was unclear.. but yeah, everything in the last chapter (24) was a dream
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Post by Jp on Jun 10, 2009 20:51:24 GMT -5
woah five days so many updates ;D ohh kay; so here's the next chapter xxvi i think
Gregor woke up sweating and panting. He quickly forced his hands through his hair, “It was all a dream,” he whispered. “Just a stupid dream was all it was” he sat back up against the bedpost and Olli shifted in the bed to face his Mann. “What’s up baby?” Olli asked as he rubbed his eyes open and placed his hand on Gregor’s leg. Gregor looked at him, “nightmare is all” Gregor said quickly, without even hesitation” “Well, are you up for a little fun?” Olli asked as he sat up quickly at the side of Gregor. Gregor smiled as he felt Olli kiss his neck. Olli then moved his Gregor’s neck and down to his chest. Olli wasn’t wasting any time.
Gregor smiled and put his arms behind his neck. Once this movement happened, he felt Olli take himself into his mouth and he let out a small soft moan. “Olli” Gregor said after five minutes of the pleasure that he was receiving. ‘Christian’ the name rattled throughout his head. He shut his eyes and then opened them quickly and looked down at Olli. He blinked and then he saw Christian there doing the deed. ‘What the f-‘ he asked himself and then blinked, realizing that it was Olli there. -- “Knock, Knock” Gregor said outside of the bathroom door because he heard the shower running. There was no answer; it was probably Olli who was in there anyway. He walked in and shut the door behind him. “Hey baby, you want some company in there?” Gregor asked from the bathroom’s sink. Christian flung open the shower curtain “You know I do-“ he stopped once he met Gregor’s eyes. “Oh sorry Christian” “Sorry Gregor, you sounded exactly like Stephen” Gregor tried to avoided the fact that his brother was in the shower. However, he was unable to avoid the temptation of looking ‘at’ his brother. “So I’m just going to get back to my shower” Christian said awkwardly as he pulled the shower curtain closed.
“Gregor, I love you” Christian said softly. Gregor sat there staring at the closed curtain; he needed to get out of that room. He quickly left the bathroom and he walked into the house’s kitchen. “Why am I feeling like this?” Gregor asked himself as he grabbed some ice cream from the fridge, a spoon, and took a huge spoonful of ice cream, and then put it into his mouth, it was 11:30 P.M. -- The next day, Olli had taken Peter to see his parents, Gregor wasn’t interested, Christian was out looking for work, Sarah was at work, and Peter didn’t live here. He was all-alone, the whole house to himself. He had found his way to the computer, and he opened his a search engine. Into the engine, he typed ‘what should you do if you are having feelings for your brother?’ he then clicked search.
He clicked on the first result that was given to him. He read it quickly and it said,
Wow, having feelings for another person is your family? That’s sick, why would you even consider that? My advice, go seek some therapy.
Sadly, that was the best advice that he had received.
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Post by Jp on Jun 5, 2009 12:35:14 GMT -5
Liz I just read 'after the surgery' aww the Halunke and Gast84 thing was cute. ;D CHrisitian is very helpful. and 3290483029 points for scared Judith :]
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Post by Jp on Jun 5, 2009 12:31:35 GMT -5
OKAY IVE MADE A DECISION!!!!! I'M GOING TO MAKE THAT LAST CHAPTER A 'PART' OF GREGOR'S BOOK THAT HE OCASSIONALY WRITES! GOOD? I'm leaving Olli, he doesn't deserve to die three times. Jp: I'm so sorry, I really didn't intend to change your own storyline when I commented that it's the 3rd time for Olli Well, Atleast Olli's death made me to put my moods aside and start commenting again (Of course got a lot of energy and good mood from yesterday & today's episodes afterward ;D) no no its not your fault. I've had a lot of people tell me that killing off Olli was way to fast, so I might just delete the last chapter that I posted, or might use it as a dream sequence/chapter in Gregor's book, eh I'll figure it out. Back to the drawing board. Oh and Karina&Liz: ( i hope it was theb oth of you that were talking about this or otherwise I will sound like an idiot) but the pictures of Olli and Christian across from the hall, staring at each other, gives me an idea for a fic *Quickly starts typing* mabye I should finish undecided?! Everyone else thanks so much for your comments, and support ;D I'll get Olli out of this mess, some how.
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Post by Jp on Jun 4, 2009 21:34:10 GMT -5
OKAY IVE MADE A DECISION!!!!! I'M GOING TO MAKE THAT LAST CHAPTER A 'PART' OF GREGOR'S BOOK THAT HE OCASSIONALY WRITES! GOOD? I'm leaving Olli, he doesn't deserve to die three times.
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Post by Jp on Jun 3, 2009 21:57:11 GMT -5
Wooohooo! here i am friends; ch: XXV (are you guys happy? it's a LITTLE bit longer) Gregor stroked his lover’s hair and smiled when Olli snuggled into the hospital blanket. “I wish they could let you go home. Anyways, how are you feeling?” Gregor asked hoping that he was doing better. “Not good, I don’t feel well, I wish I could see Peter. I miss him so much” “I know baby, I know!” Gregor said sighing softly hoping that Olli knew that if he could let Peter into the hospital, he would, but unfortunately he couldn’t. -- “Mr. Mann? Can I have a word with you for a minute?” Leonard said the next day, to Gregor who was sitting outside of the waiting room. “I need to ask you a question” he began. “It seems that Oliver is not in a state of mind, where he can make his own decisions, since he has no living will that we know of, you need to be the designated decision maker, meaning you need to decided about euthanasia” Leonard said. Gregor looked at him with a puzzled look, “Eu-than-asia?” he said slowly. “What exactly does that mean?” he asked the doctor with a concerned look.
“We realized that Oliver is not going to get better anytime soon, he might even get worse, so I want to know, you would like to take away Olli’s life support, and have him die, or continue to have him receive oxygen without a chance of getting better” Gregor sank to the floor and forced his hands to his face and let out a loud sob. He knew that Olli was a little nuts from the operations, and treatments that he had received, he just didn’t know that it was that bad. “Kill him?” Gregor asked looking up at the doctor. Leonard nodded. -- “Seriously? Oh my-“ “I know” “I’m so sorry bro, what are you going to do?” Christian asked his brother an hour later. “I don’t know, Olli doesn’t look to good,” Gregor cried. “Do what you think is best” “Where’s Peter?” -- “Look who’s here, someone came to see you dada,” Gregor said as he placed Peter on the seat next to Olli’s bed. “Hi baby, I love you” Olli said to Peter, Gregor wasn’t able to say anything, he knew the outcome, they both knew it, Peter was the one, who it would have no affect on in the beginning but would then understand it all.
An hour later, “I love you baby,” Gregor said as he placed a kiss over Olli’s lips. “I love you so much” Olli said quickly and closed his eyes. -- It was over. “Why did I do that?” “It only helped him, trust me, you did the right thing” “I know, I just feel like it all came to fast” -- Three weeks later, the house was quiet; no one was there to make breakfast for everyone. No one was there to make sure that everyone had a blanket over himself or herself during the night. No one was there to make sure that there was always enough food in the fridge, or that there were enough clothes in the bathroom, when you had finished washing up. No one!
“How are you feeling Gregor?” Christian asked as he plopped down onto the couch next to his brother, hoping that he was feeling better. “Eh, alright, it’s just so weird without him” “Yeah I know” “It’s like a part of me is missing you know? It feels so weird, I loved him Christian” “I know man”
Two hours went by, and the two brothers were still in their same positions, talking about random drabble that entered their mind. Gregor gave Christian that look, he batted his eyelashes and found himself, and his lips moving closer to Christian’s, Christian found his moving closer to the other Mann’s as well. Just as they were about to fiercely collide, Stephen walked into the room, “Hey Manns” he chuckled at his own little joke, and Gregor realized what was about to happen. He quickly got to his feet, “I have to go” and left the house. “What was that about?” Stephen asked, running over to his boyfriend. “Olli” Christian sighed, and kissed his boyfriend quickly.
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