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Post by Jp on Dec 19, 2008 11:16:54 GMT -5
I say we all split Christian ;] haha. I'm sorry for making Olli and Gregor assholes, but I needed something.
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Post by Jp on Dec 19, 2008 10:37:55 GMT -5
I'm going to be extra kind, and post three chapters:] Any suggestions? Who knows I might even use them Chapter 10:A couple of days passed, and Christmas grew closer. Gregor had put up holiday decorations all around No Limits, and everyone just seemed happier, except for Christian. Sure, Christian was happy, but just not his usual self. A lot was going on inside his head. He kept on thinking that Olli and Gregor were seeing each other on the side, and every time the two of them, Olli and Gregor, were together, and Christian walked in the room, he just got an awkward vibe. This was not just a one time thing though, he had felt the vibe many times, and sometimes multiple times in a day. Christian wanted to talk to Olli about it, but he just didn’t know how to talk to him about it. For example, Christian had taken a shower, and when he was finished, he walked back out into the kitchen were he saw Gregor and Olli just staring at each other from opposite ends of the room. Just staring, not talking, absolutely silent. Also, when Christian had walked into No Limits one day, he found Olli and Gregor sitting at the same table drinking coffee with each other. Shouldn’t Gregor have been working? Or does Christian just have a bad case of paranoia? “Whatever, shake it off Christian, it’s nothing.” He would say to himself over and over. He needed to just relieve himself of the worries. -------------------- Another couple of days passed, and things seemed to get better between Olli and Christian, and Christian didn’t even have to say anything to Oliver. Christian woke up one morning, to the sun shinning in on his room. Christian rubbed his eyes quickly and said “Good morning baby” as he looked to his left side. No Olli. “Well never mind.” Christian said correcting himself. “Who am I talking to?” he asked himself quickly. All he could do was laugh, at the conversation that he had just had with himself. Getting out of bed, he walked over to the door and opened wondering where Olli ran off to. He walked down the hall and slowly opened the door to the kitchen; well he had just found Olli. He saw Olli sitting on the couch with Gregor. Olli was running his hands through Gregor’s hair, with a huge smile played on his face. He saw Gregor just sitting there, also with a smile on their face. What where the two doing? A little too friendly. Just what Christian needed? Christian walked out from behind the door and walked over to the couch and kneeled down behind it, staring at Olli and Gregor. “So what are you two doing?” Christian asked quickly. Olli didn’t even look at Gregor but continue doing what he was doing, “Fixing Gregor’s hair, it was a mess, and he has an interview today.” Christian looked at them, and thought that Olli was telling the truth, I mean it didn’t really look like anything, now that he thought of it. “You guys still up for that threesome?” Olli asked. Christian laughed loudly; “Right!” he said walking over to the kitchen and getting a banana to eat. “I’m being serious.” Olli said quickly. Christian looked at him and had absolutely no expression on his face. Chapter 11:Christian couldn’t even think straight when Olli had made that comment. “A threesome? I don’t think that would be such a good idea. After all, Gregor is my brother, and you are my boyfriend.” He made an emphasis on you. Olli got up quickly and walked over to Christian and said in a seductive voice, “Yeah but, that would make me so horny” he said as he whispered into his ear and kissed Christian neck, and also biting it softly. He looked back up at him, “What do you say?” Olli asked. Christian just looked at Olli, “Let me think about it” he said trying to avoid the subject. Christian peeled the banana and took a big bite from it. He looked at them, “well I’m really tired, I barely slept, so I’m going to go and take a long nap” he said before walked back into the hall and then into his room, where he plopped on his bed and fell asleep in no time. Olli and looked at Gregor, “he must be tired.” Olli sighed as he sat down next to Gregor on the couch, and looked at him. He grabbed the remote control on the table in front of them, and turned on the television. Olli relaxed on the couch, as well as Gregor. ----------------- About 10 minutes later, Olli started to think about the idea of a threesome, and got a boner. He could barely hide it; the bulge was so big, that it was hard to miss it through Olli’s sweatpants that he was wearing. Gregor looked down and Olli’s bulge and smiled. He placed his hand on Olli’s leg and rubbed it softly. He rubbed it for a couple of minutes, before moving his hand over Olli’s boner. “Wait stop!” Olli said quickly, as he focused his eyes on Gregor’s face and not on his hand. Gregor continued to caress the bulge, and Olli forgot all about it. “Keep going!” Olli moaned softly. Gregor smiled and quickly took off his shirt. Olli looked at him without his shirt on and his jaw dropped, “Wow.” He smiled as he quickly took off his own shirt. Gregor smiled, “Wow yourself” and took off his pants and helped Olli take off his pants as well, leaving both men in their underwear. Olli smiled and Gregor continued to rub Olli’s crotch, “Fuck this!” Olli said quickly, and slid off his underwear and also grabbed Gregor’s underwear and slid them off. Gregor grabbed Olli’s hard dick and started to pump his hand quickly. Olli did the same with Gregor’s. Olli looked at Gregor, and Gregor leaned in to kiss Olli. ------------------ “Fuck me harder.” Olli moaned loudly, as Gregor shoved his dick into Olli’s ass. Suddenly, Christian appeared at the door, “Oh shit!” Olli whispered. Olli and Gregor had forgotten all about him. Chapter 12:“Olli? Gregor? What the fuck is going on here?” Christian said, as he could feel his insides grow hotter with rage. “It’s not what it looks like.” Olli said. “Oh so Gregor is just getting something out of your ass with his dick?” Christian asked furiously. “I don’t believe you, both of you, that’s it, Gregor, I’m not speaking to you for the rest of my life, and you, Olli, and you can go back to your old room, because you sure as hell aren’t welcomed in mine. Oh and I hope you two are a happy couple.” Christian said before slamming the door and walking back into his room. In his room, he looked for all of Olli’s stuff. He put all of it into a corner and then opened the door. He walked over to the corner, picked up the stuff and threw it out the door, so Olli could see it, when he tried to come into Christian’s room. Christian slammed the door in his room and lay down on his bed and punched his pillow, wondering what he did to deserve this. Olli looked at Gregor, and Gregor at Olli. “What did we just do?” Olli asked the other man. “Well we had sex. I think.” Gregor said stupidly. “How? Why?” Olli questioned. “I don’t know, all I remember is Christian barging in on us, and that you had a boner.” Gregor said with a smirk. “This is no time for joking Gregor, Christian is hurt, and we did not make it any better.” “I know Olli, what do we do?” “I don’t think that anything is going to fix this. Maybe I should just forget about him, and be with you.” Olli said in an unsure voice. “Maybe.” Gregor said as he put his arm around Olli to show some comfort. -------------------- Christian looked up at the ceiling and began to cry, as memories came back to him. “I tried fighting it, but I’ve fallen in love with you.” Christian had said to Olli the day where they had become boyfriends. “It’s all a bunch of crap.” He said to himself. “I never meant anything; he was just playing me like a game, a really easy game, to get to my brother. That jerk! Fuck man.” Christian sighed and put the pillow over his face, hoping that there was some way that this would change. Christian honestly thought that Olli was the one, the one that he would spend the rest of his life with, the one that he would buy a house with, and maybe even start a family. It’s to late now! It seems like everyone in the world is out to get Christian. Why him? Why?
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Post by Jp on Dec 19, 2008 1:13:45 GMT -5
Karina: loved it. i think judith and constantin should get married <3 the archduke is coming ?!?
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Post by Jp on Dec 17, 2008 22:43:37 GMT -5
Karina: Oh miss Karina, your stories are so wonderful :] I liked this chapter but Christian and Sebastian? I would prefer Christian and Olli :]
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Post by Jp on Dec 16, 2008 23:05:54 GMT -5
lizg12: Well let's jjust say it was more of a happy beginning, in a way. Karina: Great job. Loved it.
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Post by Jp on Dec 15, 2008 22:10:35 GMT -5
Karina: Once again I loved the chapter. :] Awesome! Yup there will be more. I'm not done with them just yet.
viga2430: Don't mention it.: ]
sonnenschein: Well, let's just say that yes Christian "forgave" him. A threesome? Would you like that to be included? HAHA!
riboflavinb2: So sad, but oh so beautiful. Wonderful job.
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Post by Jp on Dec 14, 2008 22:45:42 GMT -5
I'm so nice, I'll post chapter 9 :]
Chapter 9: Olli Has A Good Idea
“Christian, listen, it wasn’t Olli’s fault, really, it was mine, and I’m really truly sorry about it, please believe me.” Gregor started. “Well you see, when I told you that I liked someone, and how it was someone from years ago, well it was all a lie. I liked Olli, and I should have never crossed that line. I realize now that, what I did was totally insensitive and I’m a jerk for doing that, please you have to believe me, don’t blame Olli. If you’re to blame anyone, you should blame me. I’m really truly sorry.” Gregor finished as he sighed and put his face into his hands.
“No it was my entire fault. Believe me! I should have backed away and left right then and there, I should not have stayed, or even kissed him back. I’m an ass for doing that, and I do not know what came over me.” Olli said as he looked over at Christian, who was eating.
It seemed as if Christian was totally in another world. The truth was that Christian was in another world.
All he could think about was Olli and Gregor kissing over and over again. The thought made him shudder and get back to earth. “Sure you say that now, but do you know how much that heart? I was literally crushed. My heart broke into two. I mean, Olli I love you so much, I would do anything for you, but when I saw that scene, I just don’t know if the feeling is mutual.” “It is Christian believe me, I-“Olli said before getting cut off by Christian. “And you, Gregor, my own family, my brother, the only one that I have left in this world, who is a member of my family. The one that I look up to, the one who was always there when I was younger, who would come and find me, whenever I was upset and hug me until I felt better, and tell me that everything was okay, and that if I really believed in something, that it would come true, if I didn’t doubt myself. What happened to that?” Christian said as he got up slowly and walked towards the window and sighed. “Everything is different now, and it sucks.”
During the time where Christian had been talking, Olli and Gregor both looked down at the floor, because they did not have the courage to look at him. Too much pain. Judith, had been sitting with her hands on both sides of her face. Olli slowly got up, followed by Gregor, and they walked over to Christian and hugged him tightly. “I’m so sorry, Christian, I love you.” Olli said as he placed his lips on Christian’s neck and then pulled back. Gregor hugged Christian and kissed his cheek, “I love you little brother.” Gregor said before letting go of both men.
“Aw, that’s what I love to see.” Judith smiled and looked at all three of them. Olli had a smirk on his face and said, “How about a threesome?” he asked before laughing and hugging Christian. “Good idea!” The Mann brothers both joked. “I could show you two how it’s really done.” Gregor said as he flattered himself. “Funny!” Christian laughed, “Because you would be the one taking notes from me.” He laughed and looked at both men and smiled. One big happy, awkward family. Just the way it’s supposed to be.
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Post by Jp on Dec 14, 2008 22:14:39 GMT -5
It's here, chapter 8 :] I'll think of a snazzy name soon haha and I might post chapter 9 soon, that's if I write it.
here it is :]
Olli quickly took a shower and then got ready. Judith made some food, Christian’s favorite, and waited for Christian. “Olli, go wait in his room, you’ll know when he’s here.” Judith smiled, and Olli nodded and then did as Judith said. “Thank you.” Olli said quickly and hugged Judith before going into Christian’s room. -------------------------------- About 5 minutes later, Christian knocked on the door and Judith went to go and open it. “Christian!” Judith said extra loudly hoping that Olli would hear her. Thankfully, Olli did!
Christian smiled and hugged Judith, “Hello Judith.” He smiled and sniffed quickly, “Something smells really good” he grinned. “Only you’re favorite.” Judith smiled and walked over to the kitchen. “You shouldn’t have, really.” Christian said and looked over at the kitchen and smiled once more, “but since you did, I’ll be happy to have some, if you don’t mind.” “Mind? I made it for you, silly.” Judith said as she continued stirring the food.
“Thanks.” Christian said once again, “I’m just going to pack some of the stuff in my room.” Christian said as he walked over to the door leading to his old room, “Alright” Judith said.
Christian opened the door and walked down the hall to his old room, and stood right in front of the door. “Wow” Christian said softly and sighed before opening the door. When he opened the door, the first thing he saw was Olli. It was like a scene in a movie. The sun was shinning on Olli’s face, and it just looked perfect. Christian stepped in without realizing it, and looked at him. “Hello Christian.” Olli said at once. “Out of my room” Christian said finally snapping back and remembering what had happened. “Please Chris-“”Now! Get out!” Christian said without even letting Olli finish his sentence.
Olli stood up and walked over to him, “Christian, you have to know that it wasn’t me. It was all Gregor; I love you so much, please believe me.” Olli said trying not to cry. “Right, sure, it was all Gregor, you just happened to be there kissing him back right? You’re really funny Olli, I think you should be a comedian, you know what? I should have never come back here, such a waste of time.” Christian said as he grabbed one of his shirts that was nearby and walked out of the room not even looking back at Olli.
Olli just stared at the door and sighed, “Not again.”
Christian walked out of the hall and back into the room where Judith was, “Christian? Are you okay?” “No I’m not okay, Olli just tried talking to me, like you didn’t know, and I should have never come back. It was so pointless.” Christian said as he made his way towards the door. “Christian, please don’t go, I think we should talk.” Olli said as he quickly came from behind the door and walked over to Judith who had already put the food on the table. “Talk? I’ve talked enough. Thank you. Goodbye Judith, Olli.” Christian said as he opened the door and stepped out.
To Christian’s surprise, guess who was outside the door. You guessed it, Gregor. Perfect. Oh boy, family reunion. Here we go!
Gregor looked at Christian, “Hello Christian.” He said before coughing quickly, “they’re right, let’s talk.” Gregor said as he grabbed Christian’s arm and dragged him inside. Christian twitched furiously, “Let me go, do not touch me. Let go!” Christian yelled. “Not a chance.” Gregor said as he let go of Christian and then locked the door, once they were inside. “You’re not leaving now.” Gregor said as he grabbed a chair and placed it in front of the door and sat down on it.
“What? What do you want? Tell me I’m listening.” Christian said as he plumped down on a chair and began to eat some of the food that Judith put down in front of him. He couldn’t help it, when he was made he ate. So, if Christian ate every time something went wrong, or when he was sad or mad, he would gain a lot of weight.
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Post by Jp on Dec 12, 2008 17:10:15 GMT -5
Karina: I need more. More I tell you. :] I loved it!
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Post by Jp on Dec 11, 2008 23:11:21 GMT -5
Chapter 7: Thank Goodness For Judith
Olli quickly ran down to No-Limits to try and see if Christian had still been there. He looked around seeing no Christian and he sighed. He opened the door and looked outside, “Christian!” he yelled loudly. Nothing! No one! Empty. Sadness.
Olli walked back in and shut the door behind him and slugged back up the stairs to the flat. He walked back into the flat and saw Gregor over at the window, staring out intently. “Gregor, your brother just left, and it’s both of our faults. Why did you have to go and do that?” Olli asked as he started to become really frustrated. “Because I like you, Olli.” “But I love Christian, and-“ Olli started. Gregor quickly cut him off, “Yeah, we all saw that today.”
Olli threw his hands into the air, “Remember it was you that kissed me. And it seemed like-“ Gregor quickly turned to face him, “You didn’t pull back.” “That’s not true, I tried, you held onto me, I hate this. Man Gregor why did you have to kiss me? Everything is screwed up now. Shit.” Olli said as he sat quickly on the couch with the pillow over his face.
“Olli don’t you think I know how you feel? Totally falling for someone and then having that person hate you? Wanting to be with that person twenty four seven, and spending the rest of your life with him? Being a fucking dumb ass and letting your own brother run out like that because you got horny, and just could not control your feelings for your brother’s boyfriend. That’s having it bad. You know what, I should have never told you or Christian any of this, look where is has gotten us. It sucks, and I can’t take all of this.” Gregor said as his face turned bright red from all of the anger, sadness and grief.
“I know, I know, I’m sorry. It’s just I loved him so much and now he’s actually gone. Gone. It sucks, and I miss him so much, I need to see him and talk to him” he said as a gush of tears streamed down his face. “I know Olli, I’m sorry for messing everything up it’s entirely my fault.” He said before hugging Olli tightly and rubbing his back, trying to comfort him. ------------------------------- Countless days passed, how many exactly Olli didn’t know. He was to busy being wrapped in everything that happened. He would sometimes find himself lying in Christian’s bed, sobbing like a baby. It sucked being heartbroken.
Olli needed to see Christian, desperately. He craved for Christian. It was terrible. He needed, with the help of Gregor, to talk to Christian, to tell him what had really happened. Gregor, however, did not have any time off during the next couple of days. So that was out of the question. Plus, Olli didn’t even know where Christian was. The gym? He couldn’t be, not for this long. A friend’s house? Sure why not? But a friend, or a potential new lover? These were questions that Olli did not want to answer.
He tried every which way to contact Christian, searching everywhere in town for him, even calling his cell phone. Christian was probably ignoring him. Christian had to come back to collect his things some day right?
Olli pondered on that thought for a moment, and he had an idea, and he needed Judith. Thankfully, Judith had agreed on their little plan. Judith called Christian the same day and actually got an answer.
“Judith!” Christian said happily. “How are you?”
“Christian, it’s so good to hear your voice. I miss you, where have you been?” she asked, as she put him on speakerphone so Olli could hear his voice. “Actually, I’ve been staying with Sarah. She has been kind enough to let me stay with her.” Christian sighed. “Christian, listen, you still have some of your things here, when do you plan on getting them, so I can make sure to be home.” Judith asked as she looked at Olli with a smile.
“Actually, when I pick them up, I just want you to be there.” Christian said quickly. “Alright, well how about now?” she asked quickly as well. “Umm sure, I’ll be right over.” He said before hanging up the phone.
“Olli go get ready.” Judith said as she started to make some food. The plan was set. Now all they had to do was make sure that nothing went wrong. Nothing could go wrong? Could it? Don’t answer that question.
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Post by Jp on Dec 11, 2008 19:05:56 GMT -5
viga2430: Yeah Gregor lied to his brother. Thanks, I appreciate it. It is always good to hear good comments :]
Karina: Congrats. Thanks, again. That really inspired me to continue writing the story. Can't wait for the next chapter of 'Impossible' and 'Kissing a Fool'.
lizg12: Great first chapter. :] I loved it.
fairy: Thanks on the positive comments toward all of the writers: ]
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Post by Jp on Dec 10, 2008 23:09:59 GMT -5
Here is chapter 6: Don't Toy With My Emotions.
I decided to post it :]
Be sure to read ch. 5 first.
Gregor looked down at the floor quickly and then back at Olli, why was it so hard to tell Olli who he liked? “Well his name it… his name is” He sighed once more. “Alright it’s you!” That’s why it was so hard to tell him. Gregor looked at him hoping that he would not just ignore him after that. That was probably the hardest thing that Gregor had ever done.
“You like- wait me- you like-“Olli could not even form a complete sentence, he was just so overwhelmed in everything that had happened. Talk about a hectic life. “So you’re telling me that it’s me that you like?” Olli asked. “What’s so hard to understand Olli? Every time you walk into the room I’m always smiling. I’m always spilling things over. I can’t even talk correctly, I constantly stare at you. I like you Olli.” Olli didn’t know what to say. He was flattered but he was with Christian. “Gregor, I’m really sorry but I love Christian.” “I know but I can’t help it.”
Once that statement was finished Gregor immediately kissed Olli softly against his lips. However, Olli didn’t pull back, he tried but couldn’t. He finally got the power to pull back from Gregor and caught his eyes. Within seconds, Gregor and Olli found themselves kissing each other again. Gregor pushed Olli up against the wall, and moved his hands up and down Olli’s back as they kissed.
“Gregor, are you in here?” Christian asked before walking in to the heartbreaking scene. “Olli? Gregor? Olli? So this is who you like? Well, I hope you two are happy together. Have a good fucking life.” He said before raising his middle finger and running out of the room and up to the flat.
Olli and Gregor looked at each other and both simultaneously said, “Christian, wait!” Gregor ran out of the room followed by Olli. They both ran up to the flat to talk to him. They walked in, quiet, they ran to Christian’s room. “Christian, it’s not what it looks like, I-““I don’t want to hear it Oliver. I saw you.” “Christian, he didn’t do anything, I was the one-““Gregor, it’s funny that you are the one that’s talking. Let me make it easier for the young couple in front of me, I am leaving, moving out, I will come back later to get my stuff. Goodbye Oliver, Goodbye Gregor, tell Judith I said goodbye.” Olli walked over to him and looked him in the eyes, “Please believe me Christian, nothing happened. We were, he just told me that-“he sighed. “Please believe me.” Olli said as he started to cry.
“Why should I believe you after what you two just did to me? Funny.” Christian said as he grabbed a bag that had a few of his clothes in it. He also grabbed his cell phone and his cell phone charger. “Goodbye Oliver, goodbye Gregor, I hope you two have a great relationship, I wouldn’t count on it. Considering we have two cases: one is a no good, lying man, who can’t cook, can’t fight and can’t really do anything himself. And the second case we have is: a brother who is full of shit, always the one to delve into these one night stands that he has, trying to forget about Sarah, well boo-hoo. You two suck.” Christian said as he stormed out of the room, trying to hold in his emotions. He walked out of the flat, and then out the building, not wanting to look back at what had just happened.
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Post by Jp on Dec 10, 2008 22:26:59 GMT -5
Here is chapter 5 Olli could still not believe that Gregor was in love with a man. “You have no idea who is in love with?” Olli asked as he made his way to the couch and sat down next to Christian as he placed a hand on his leg. “He says that it’s someone from a couple of years ago, someone who used to be his best friend, but I don’t think so. I’ve known Gregor my whole life, he is my brother after all, and a couple of years ago, he was not really that social. I mean sure he had friends and what not, but he never really kept the same group of friends for a long time. I just don’t know. I’m going to find out who it is though.” Christian grinned mischievously and glanced quickly over at Olli. “Alright whatever you say.” Olli agreed and stood up quickly making his way back over to the kitchen, and continued to cook the food that he was trying to make. “Let me do it Olli, after all I am a much better cook than you” he said before standing up quickly. “Oh really huh? Alright Mr. Hot Shot, you make the food and then I will be the judge of it. As of now, I want to go talk to Gregor.” He said at once and walked to Christian and planted a kiss on his lips quickly before going to grab his jacket and putting it on. “Ciao.” Christian said thinking that he was cool. Olli just laughed to himself and left the flat and started to make his way down to No-Limits. Entering the coffee shop, he spotted Gregor and smiled. He walked over to the bar and sat on one of the bar seats and called Gregor’s name. Gregor quickly came over to him, “Hi Olli! What can I get you? Some coffee?” “Nothing, thank you. So, Christian told me about the conversation that you two had together.” “I knew it! Ugh Christian why?” Gregor asked as if he was talking to Christian. “Don’t worry, Gregor I don’t think differently of you.” Olli said in a rather loud tone. “Olli, can we talk somewhere privately?” Gregor asked quickly and Olli nodded in response. Gregor took Olli to a room he had never seen. It was a small room that no one knew about except for the Mann brother’s and the employees. It was a small room that almost seemed like it was lacking in oxygen. “Nice room?” he said in a question form, however not trying to be rude about it. “Yeah I know!” he agreed. “So, who is this guy?” Olli asked as he grabbed a chair that was in the room. Gregor sighed, “You don’t know him.” Olli raised a curious eyebrow, “Really? Well, I don’t care. I want you to tell me anyway.” “Fine!” Gregor said as he started to pace the small room which caused Olli to stand. “So, ever since I’ve seen the guy, my heart had just skipped a beat. It’s like I can’t control myself. I smile like an idiot, I almost instantly knock things over, and my face turns red. The other day Lydia asked me why I was not acting like myself and I had to tell her that I was taking some new medicine that made me a little dizzy. I just can’t control myself. I’ve never had this feeling for someone before. He is so beautiful. Everything about him is beautiful! His laugh, smile, eyes, lips, everything. I can’t take it anymore.” Gregor said and then pushed his face into his hands. “Gregor-“ Olli said as he rubbed his back and Gregor stood up straight. “It’s okay, but don’t dodge my question, who is it that you like.” Gregor sighed quickly and then Olli looked at him, “Well his name is-“
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Post by Jp on Dec 10, 2008 21:45:33 GMT -5
Karina: Thanks so much Karina. I love the new chapter (but thats nothing new, I like everything you write haha) I can't wait for the next one. Go Olivia! ;D sonnenschein: I'm hoping to post a new chapter today (well today for me because it is 9:44 p.m) but it may get posted tomorrow. I'm trying for today :] viga2430: You will find out shortly.
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Post by Jp on Dec 10, 2008 21:37:02 GMT -5
j9l45: Your right, it is better to take some time off haha. :] It helped me out ! nana29: Oh im sorry, at least you got a day of rest, technically.
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Post by Jp on Dec 9, 2008 22:37:32 GMT -5
They are probably practicing so the next time they will do something with a plot they won't look that stiff Haha your probably right
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"Well, back in my wild days I didn't really care if they were men or women." - Gregor Mann
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Post by Jp on Dec 9, 2008 22:35:49 GMT -5
No problem. I'm glad to help. Your right, they are both really talented, and staying in the 'Karen' voice must be hard when singing.
I think she is probably one of the best singers out there.
I also love this video of her singing.
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Post by Jp on Dec 9, 2008 22:32:39 GMT -5
karina: I loved the Britney Spear's documentary. Sorry I drifted off there. Yes, your siggie rocks haha! Who's Gregor in love with? Well I've actually been thinking about that, and I'm probably going to mix it up a little. I would be writing now but, I can't I have exams tomorrow. Grr. Anyway, I might post another chapter tomorrow. :]
viga2430: Gregor is in love with.... sorry no spoilers for my story haha. :] No problem. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
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Post by Jp on Dec 9, 2008 22:27:54 GMT -5
nana29 Haha did you enjoy it?
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 22:56:47 GMT -5
^this one is a tribute but also includes jack and karen singing unforgettable
^this one is jack singing no scrubs and i just thought that it was really funny
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 22:26:25 GMT -5
j9l45: Oh nice christimas shopping :] i love that
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 22:25:44 GMT -5
j9l45: Well both, I was kind of sick and I just needed a day off.
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 22:24:02 GMT -5
Here is chapter 4 :]
Gregor just stood there and was unable to move. Christian had his hand over Olli’s and clenched it really hard. Olli tried not to move or say anything. The tension was so high in the room, that you could cut it with a knife. Gregor opened his mouth trying to say something, anything, but nothing came out.
“Maybe I should just go” he started as he turned around. “Gregor! Wait!” Christian exclaimed hoping that his brother would stop. “What? I’ve got to go.” Gregor said quickly. “Wait! Just listen to me.” Christian said as he let go of Olli and say up. Gregor sighed and turned around to face both of the men that were in bed together, “Why didn’t you tell me Christian.”
These words made Christian sigh and remember everything that had happened, from the moment he knew that he was in love with Oliver, to the moment were he say Olli and some other guy dancing close together at some bar. “I’m sorry Gregor; I just thought that you would, I don’t know, not accept me.” “Christian, you know that I will always love you, no matter what. Not telling me something like this, is really stupid. You should trust me. I love you Christian.” Gregor smiled as he walked over to the bed and sat on it. As Gregor sat on the bed, Olli made sure that his bottom half was covered with the blanket. “I’m sorry bro.” he said before hugging him tightly.
“Now I want the both of you to get up, and come down to No-Limits right now.” Gregor said as he stood up next to the bed. “Come on right now!” he said in a louder tone. “Uh Gregor?” Christian started. “What?” He asked. “We kind of need to get dressed before anything, and you need to well leave.” Christian said. “Oh right sorry.” Gregor laughed and walked out of their room. -------------------------------- The next couple of days, everything was normal, Judith went to the construction site from nine to five, Christian went to No Limits to work and then went to the gym to work out, Olli worked at Schneider’s and then came home to Christian, and Gregor worked at No Limits as well, and had many one night stands.
Even though everything was normal, Gregor had been thinking of the night were he had caught Olli and Christian in bed together and learned that Christian was gay. He thought about many things. Mostly, he thought about when he was about eighteen years old. You see, when Gregor was eighteen he experimented. He had had an attracted with one guy, and he sort of missed him and the way that he made him feel. It was different that all of the other women that he had been with.
“Christian, can I talk to you? It’s really important.” Gregor asked his younger brother as he finished wiping off a wine glass that needed cleaning. “Sure!” Christian smiled as he closed the cash register and looked at his brother, “What’s up?” “Can we talk over there?” he asked as he pointed to the table at the far end. “Yeah!” he exclaimed as he made his way to the table with his brother. “I’ve been thinking about everything, and I just wanted to get a few things off of my chest.” He said slowly not really knowing how to say it all. “Well a few years ago, I had a friend, and you see well we experimented one day, and I think that I just realized that I miss him and that I might actually love him. I just need someone to talk to about this. It’s scaring me, because I have never really felt like this.” Christian laughed, “I knew it! I knew it!” he laughed as he looked at his brother, “It’s okay, I’m sure that everyone goes through this. Why don’t you call him?” “Maybe your right? But I’m not sure, I’ll think about it.” Gregor added. “I hope your right.”
“Don’t worry bro.” Christian said trying to comfort him. ------------------------------------ Gregor let Christian leave earlier that day, and Christian found himself on the couch waiting for Olli. He shut his eyes and when he woke up, he awoke to the smell of cooking food. “What’s that smell?” “Food, just for you.” Olli said as he continued to cook the food. “It smells wonderful.” Christian said sitting up slowly. “What a long day I’ve had.” “What happened?” Olli asked quickly. “Well, Gregor just told me that he is in love with a man.” “No way!” Olli said quickly. “Yup, and he’s really scared.” Christian looked at Olli worriedly. “I guess he is just like me after all.” Christian said as he laid his head back against the couch trying to process everything that just happened.
Boy oh boy did his life move fast.
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 21:10:29 GMT -5
I dislike my teachers right now. I have too much stuff. A Spanish test tomorrow, A Math test on Thursday, a Biology test on Thursday, and DBQ for history on Thursday, and essay for English for Monday, a History test on Monday, Denebola newspaper this week, a Chinese project due next Wednesday, and a Sports Nutrition poster due next Thursday. On top of my normal schoolwork. Plus Cross-Country ski team. I cannot wait until vacation! The 23rd. On top of this I have to do well on my Bio test. Figures. *Blows Up* ouch, i've got a lot this week today, I hope i'll survive ahah, you too. :] Good luck with everything
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Post by Jp on Dec 8, 2008 18:01:49 GMT -5
haha u remeber my name. I feel like an idiot posting to replys, one after the other but I did not refresh my page haha. Like I said before the other story "Kissing a Fool" is great. You should feel kind of honored; I usally suck at names I'm glad you liked "Kissing a Fool", I'm going to add a new chapter tomorrow Great, I can't wait! I love your new signature haha
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