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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2010 14:03:45 GMT -5
Thank you Sio and Sylvain I hope to finish the next chapter by tonight but I have to go wash dishes now
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Post by sio127 on Apr 22, 2010 14:07:19 GMT -5
nah......leave the dishes........the chapter is more important!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2010 14:22:37 GMT -5
Okay I'm back As long as no one interupts me my typing should go okay
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Post by sio127 on Apr 22, 2010 14:26:53 GMT -5
okay. ::::::stands guard infront of her wearing dark glasses and a "getlost" expression::::::
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2010 15:14:49 GMT -5
I feel like I'm writing an episode of Xena or something.
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Post by sio127 on Apr 22, 2010 15:39:39 GMT -5
I'd rather you wrote an episode of Hercules!!!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2010 16:03:58 GMT -5
Okay the chapter is almost done but I have work to do now so I won't be posting until around 6pm my time, it is 3pm now.
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Post by paracelcious on Apr 22, 2010 16:46:07 GMT -5
Wow MV that chapter was great! Not to mention I just realized I missed the last two chapters as well. The great prophecy, Wow! I must say, I do believe the fate of the world lies in the union of these two souls. Think about it...
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 22, 2010 17:13:19 GMT -5
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 22, 2010 17:22:19 GMT -5
To EVERY BODY Who came and reviewed my little miniscule flight of imagination. I LOVE YOU ALL!!!! u made this new writer a very happy writer with all your encouraging reviews and appreciation. Here I can't help but quote Christian and say : I'm so happy... I feel like somehow I could burst I'd like to run around... jump... Dance"[/i] I'd do the sirtaki with each one of you if I could Because your heartfelt encouragement helped me do all this.*slobbers kisses on Thunderkat's and Paracelcious's faces* * turns to see who's next in line and spots Sylvian, Sio and Mitsaso.....*
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Post by Deleted on Apr 22, 2010 20:14:22 GMT -5
Okay Chapter 19 of Orion has been posted, I hope you guys like it and there is just one more left to go
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Post by kish on Apr 23, 2010 0:30:56 GMT -5
Hi you all, wanted to tell you that your fanfic is just wonderful. @ Realgal what a last chapter, always like your stories, and the ones from karina, liz, sio, mitaso and all the others. and though I am very intimitaded by all your great stuff, I wrote something and maybe you like it. I don`t know how to post over at the archieve yet, so I just tried here. As I am no native speaker, so please be kind The Broken Heart (by hope)
Christian When he woke up alone in his bed again, the pillow wet from all the tears he cried at night, he knew what he had to do. He couldn`t live like this anymore. The first nights after their big fight Olli would at least sleep in their bed, even though they didn`t touch, he could hear him breath and smell his wonderful scent and only then he could fall asleep. But the last three nights he went straight to his old room, where they stored the stuff that didn`t fit in Christians room anymore. Oliver wouldn`t even look at him anymore, all they did was bitching and insulting each other. Christian knew that with his jealousy, that stupid, stupid kiss with Rebecca and his lack of confidence he drove Olli away. But he couldn`t help it, he always thougt that he wasn`t good enough for him anymore and with all what he said about Nico and him... Why should Oliver stay with him, when there was someone like Rob. He was Ollis age, he was experienced, “selbstbewusst”, they were interested in the same things, wanted the same in life. Rob liked clubbing as much as Olli, he helped him to fulfill his dream. Certainly Christian wanted to help Olli too, he also wanted Olli to be happy and to have the chance to fulfill his dreams, and at the beginning everything seemed ok. The rebuilt the NO LIMITS together and worked together, but then Olli fired him. That’s when they started to drift away. He wants to be close to Olli again, but it looks like now it is too late. The trust their love was built on, seemed to have gone. He made too many mistakes. So he took his old boxing sack and packed some pants, shirts and finally the picture of Olli, where he smiled his heavenly smile. Before he left the room the turned around and remembered all the wonderful things that happened in here. He thought about that day when they kissed here for the first time after their fight about “Halunke” and “Gast84”, then their second time after he finally had the courage to tell Oliver that he fell in love with him, he remembered that last time they made love after they tried to cheer up David and then of course that awful evening when Olli surprised him with the Canadatrip and he ruined everything. With tears in his eyes he closed the door and went to the living room. Christian hoped that nobody would be awake already, because he was afraid to break down if he had to face Olli right now. Sitting at the table he took a piece of paper and wrote: Dear Oliver, I am truly sorry for all the bad things that happened between us. It was never my intention to hurt you. You are and you will always be the love of my live. I have never loved someone as much as much as I love you. Meeting you was the best thing that ever happen to me, but I can`t live like this anymore and I want to spare you more pain. So I will move “erstmal” to Königsbrunn. Maybe we can fix things when we take sometime apart. Please take care of yourself. Love you always Christian He put the note in the envelope, wrote “To Oliver” on it and put it against the vase with the flowers Andi had bought for Helena. He took a deep breath and left the flat. Oliver He was so tired, but he couldn`t sleep. This room was so cold and his bed so lonely. Why did he sleep here in the first place? His sadness, hurt and anger had trapped him, like a prison without the fences. Was Christian falling for girls again? He wanted to punish him so he stayed away from their room, but the only one he punished was himself. Well, Oliver really needed to pee but when he heard Christians door, he decided to stay. Meeting with his lover wouldn`t be the best thing right now. It would end in fights and insults. He was also a little ashamed of what he said to Christian about Nico. That wasn`t nice, but he was so jealous. Nico is beautiful, young and successful and they loved each other before.What when…? Suddenly he heard the front door shut. What was Christian doing? It was too early for his shift. Maybe he would get breakfast. Relieved he left his room and used the bathroom. On his way back he saw the envelope on the table. Suddenly his heart felt like it would stop beating. When he finished reading, tears were streaming down his face. Did Christian leave him? Was ist all over? That couldn`t be, they were meant for each other, soulpartners. Maybe Christian didn`t love him anymore, they drifted apart. He was too busy with his business, and Chris had new friends now in his class. One night some of his collegues came to the No Limits and that was the first time for quite a long time, that he saw his lover relaxed and laughing again. But how should he go on now? Judith, yeah he had to call Judith. She would know what to do. Oh how he missed her. David and Andi were good friends too, but still it is different. With Judith it was like family, she always cheered him up or told him, in her own unique way, that he was a stupid moron! He jumped when suddenly his phone rang. Christian, it will be him, telling him it was a mistake, he pleaded silently. Disappointed he heard Robs voice tellling him to hurry up or if he had forgotten their early business meeting. So he put on some clothes and went downstairs. He would handle this later, but for now he had to work. Tbc
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 23, 2010 0:40:42 GMT -5
Hey there Kish very well written loving the 1st chappie please do continue.
Kuss und Tschuss RG
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Post by sylstyle on Apr 23, 2010 2:43:37 GMT -5
thanks everyone for your chapters : Kish great first sorry, I love drama and Olli will have to do his best to bring Chris back home. And the same for Chris I though last summer you said to Judith you won't be jealous anymore lol Guest84 : great new chapters and Chrolli VS Robex great ideal lol And Olli still being able to feel Christian's warmth through his heart : really romantic Realgal : great new chapter too Florian/Olli is really mysterious. He must have really suffered to come clean and to begin a new life. MV : the queen of Orion great chapter, the fight was really marvellous and exciting. When are you selling the rights to Hollywood Sylvain
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Post by sio127 on Apr 23, 2010 3:51:13 GMT -5
To EVERY BODY Who came and reviewed my little miniscule flight of imagination. I LOVE YOU ALL!!!! u made this new writer a very happy writer with all your encouraging reviews and appreciation. Here I can't help but quote Christian and say : I'm so happy... I feel like somehow I could burst I'd like to run around... jump... Dance"[/i] I'd do the sirtaki with each one of you if I could Because your heartfelt encouragement helped me do all this.*slobbers kisses on Thunderkat's and Paracelcious's faces* * turns to see who's next in line and spots Sylvian, Sio and Mitsaso.....*
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Post by sio127 on Apr 23, 2010 3:59:23 GMT -5
Kish...::::wipes tear from eye::::: what a lovely chapter, please PLEASE continue.
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Post by sio127 on Apr 23, 2010 4:13:04 GMT -5
Okay Chapter 19 of Orion has been posted, I hope you guys like it and there is just one more left to go WOW ....... okay can't think of any other words..... ::bows before the Godess Vix::::::
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 23, 2010 5:11:08 GMT -5
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 23, 2010 5:51:44 GMT -5
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Post by sylstyle on Apr 23, 2010 5:59:40 GMT -5
Great new chapter Realgal (sorry couldn't pretend I am happy because of what happened to Olli) I see you found a good replacement for Axel I can't wait to see what you prepared for us Sylvain
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 23, 2010 6:33:48 GMT -5
Great new chapter Realgal (sorry couldn't pretend I am happy because of what happened to Olli) I see you found a good replacement for Axel I can't wait to see what you prepared for us Sylvain *peeks out from under the bed*Thank God there isn't a lynch mob after me. After what I just did....
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Post by sio127 on Apr 23, 2010 6:39:55 GMT -5
.....I've jsut read it........we are not finished with you yet......depending on what happens in the next chapter the torches and pitchforks are close to hand!!!
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Post by guest84 on Apr 23, 2010 7:03:16 GMT -5
Anyone interested in beta-reading Cursed Love please email me. rootrooty (at) yahoo (dot) com
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Post by realgal21 on Apr 23, 2010 7:44:03 GMT -5
I've decided I won't post the 23rd chapter until I reach 75 reviews and no multiple postings that's cheating. ;D
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Post by chrolliforever7 on Apr 23, 2010 7:46:55 GMT -5
omg another awesome chapter of "A Rose by Any Other Name!", realgal!!! I love it!!!!!!!!!
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